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Post by Galom on Apr 29, 2015 14:20:38 GMT 1
-Because their BST is so low and they are Bug-types, I recommend giving them either Erratic or Fast EXP rate. -Your Pokédex descriptions need work. Many of them are identical or near-identical to the sister version's. I would be happy to help you with them, if you'd let me. -I feel that your species names could improve. They seem quite bland at the moment. Some clever wordplay could make them much more interesting. You could drop the "Insect" from "the Swift Insect" Pokemon (since the insect is easily assumable), and settle with just a synonym of swift, or find a new word altogether.
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Post by chundermunch on Apr 30, 2015 0:10:00 GMT 1
I would love a little a help on it! Thanks, I'm sorry if the descriptions are kind of shabby, I'm new to all this pokemon making stuff
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Post by jaywad on Apr 30, 2015 3:45:18 GMT 1
-Because their BST is so low and they are Bug-types, I recommend giving them either Erratic or Fast EXP rate. -Your Pokédex descriptions need work. Many of them are identical or near-identical to the sister version's. I would be happy to help you with them, if you'd let me. -I feel that your species names could improve. They seem quite bland at the moment. Some clever wordplay could make them much more interesting. You could drop the "Insect" from "the Swift Insect" Pokemon (since the insect is easily assumable), and settle with just a synonym of swift, or find a new word altogether. I'm with you Galom, but pyrefly is a great name for its third evolution. The others are the ones that need changing, and not big changes at all.
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Post by Devoxys on Apr 30, 2015 12:43:17 GMT 1
I'd say Fast and not erratic, because these will probably be our early-game bug types. Erratic Pokemon start slowly and go faster after a while, which by then you might have realized that its not that good and have boxed it.
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Post by Snaquaza on May 26, 2015 20:59:25 GMT 1
I'm fine with Erratic. Approved 1/2
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Post by Ace on May 26, 2015 22:52:39 GMT 1
Looks solid. Approved 2/2.
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Post by chundermunch on May 27, 2015 1:14:52 GMT 1
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Post by Galom on May 27, 2015 2:30:27 GMT 1
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Post by chundermunch on May 27, 2015 2:31:05 GMT 1
YEEE!
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Post by jaywad on May 27, 2015 2:48:33 GMT 1
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Post by chundermunch on May 27, 2015 2:49:12 GMT 1
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Post by Salient on Dec 5, 2015 22:57:54 GMT 1
All three of these Pokemon are missing an EV yield. Please add them to the initial post, as we need that info to add them to the Wiki.
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Post by pokemonvortex on Dec 6, 2015 0:55:47 GMT 1
All three of these Pokemon are missing an EV yield. Please add them to the initial post, as we need that info to add them to the Wiki. chundermunch What's the dex color? I'm assuming it's yellow. Also, what are its footprints and body style?
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Post by chundermunch on Dec 6, 2015 19:50:29 GMT 1
Body Type is Attachments:
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Post by kizzo212 on Dec 6, 2015 23:41:05 GMT 1
Not sure what the deal is with the Base exp Yield being 72 for all 3 mons. Should be 39 for Photobug, 75 for Embuzz and 178 for Pyrefly from my calculations.
Edit: EV gains are also required, although I assume this is 1 speed, 2 speed, 3 speed. Also need one definitive dex colour for each, as opposed to explaining the colouring.
Further Edits: Don't really see why Embuzz learns Double Edge, and why Overheat comes at such a high level. I'd say a mon like this should only really go up to 60 at most, and I feel maybe overheat is kinda unneeded anyway. Why leech life only appears on Embuzz and Pyrefly at level4 and not Photobug is also confusing. And double confuse ray at 5 and 11? Feel maybe just in general the movepool is a bit too clustered, such as learning fire blast at 50 then heatwave at 52 then rage powder at 54. I feel like maybe the way to go is to scrap Overheat as I mentioned earlier and put in heatwave at ~60, or even replace flamethrower with heat wave. I don't think it needs to learn all the decent fire moves, not by level-up anyway.
Another thing. Having Bug as the primary typing for all evolutions makes more sense.
P.S. If you could state what changes are made, as I think you have done thusfar, then it would assist me as I'm adding these mons into the format for Essentials as is, and makes it easier for me to know what to update.
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Post by chundermunch on Jan 22, 2016 0:54:42 GMT 1
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Post by Salient on Oct 14, 2016 16:46:23 GMT 1
Do you have the artwork Kekecleon drew for this?
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