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Post by Salient on May 28, 2015 20:42:44 GMT 1
Oh, sorry. I didn't change the items and level up part. Will do Snaquaza
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Post by Salient on May 29, 2015 5:11:12 GMT 1
could more people tell me what to do with the Wolvun line? I'd really like some suggestions ;;
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Post by Devoxys on May 29, 2015 12:40:13 GMT 1
I prefer Canice over Artcun, due to similarities to Articuno.
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Post by Salient on Jun 2, 2015 1:14:47 GMT 1
Hello all! So I have decided to make the Wolvun line only have 2 evolutions, Wolvun and Canice. I'd like to see what all of you think?
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Post by jaywad on Jun 2, 2015 3:07:09 GMT 1
Well, I don't really see a problem but what'll happen to your idea for making the dark evo offensive and the fairy one defensive? guessing you're just gonna make it offensive?
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Post by Salient on Jun 2, 2015 3:33:08 GMT 1
jaywad, i think Canice will just stay as is, honestly. I couldn't come up with anything for it's Ice/Fairy counterpart, and it seems good as is to me. An offensive Pokemon that's not too broken. EDIT: Here are it's max stats (252+ EVs in every stat) 372 HP, 355 Atk, 247 Def, 328 SpA, 240 SpD, 328 Speed
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Post by Salient on Jun 4, 2015 2:29:01 GMT 1
bump, any other suggestions for this? I'd really appreciate it...
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Post by jaywad on Jun 4, 2015 2:45:47 GMT 1
The parents for the egg moves are missing. Other than that I can't pick out anything wrong with this Pokemon. You did a great job
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Post by Salient on Jun 4, 2015 3:11:02 GMT 1
thank you jaywad <3 I'll get on the parents in a few.
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Post by Galom on Jun 4, 2015 3:22:26 GMT 1
Gave my opinion to you in PMs. For the record, these look very promising. I like the idea a lot.
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Post by Salient on Jun 4, 2015 6:32:52 GMT 1
Tagging Snaquaza and Ace for anymore comments/suggestions, and any other stuff that should be changed.
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Post by Salient on Jun 5, 2015 20:30:18 GMT 1
Actually, tagging Snaquaza, Galom, and Ace for QC. Or yknow, any other comments (adding egg moves in like 15mins)
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Post by Ace on Jun 5, 2015 21:28:40 GMT 1
K so the opening post has changed quite drastically since the last time I saw it. Regardless I'm liking this version of Wolvun & Canice the most, you can tell you've put a lot of work into these two pokemon...so...I'm gonna approve.
Approved 1/3.
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Post by Galom on Jun 6, 2015 5:54:13 GMT 1
Very cool 'mons. They'll do great in our mountainous areas. Great submission! Approved 2/3.
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Post by Hawkie on Jun 6, 2015 6:08:20 GMT 1
A really cool line Smogoon, gj <3
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Post by Salient on Jun 6, 2015 19:46:18 GMT 1
Welp, waiting on one person. *crosses fingers*
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Post by Devoxys on Jun 6, 2015 20:44:26 GMT 1
LOL Snaquaza never replies to these threads anymore, I'm stuck at 2/3 on my Fakemon too.
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Post by Snaquaza on Jun 6, 2015 21:00:27 GMT 1
Ay ay ay, Candice wants a Canice
Anyway it's the time to be critical. 3/3 would make it approved, so this is my last chance to make changes. To begin, I want an explanation of BOTH its high speed stat and its high special attack stat. Both seem a little high, especially the speed stat which is rarely this high in canines. Afterwards, for the moves, what relation does it have to icicles? Only Shellder and the Vanillish line learn Icicle Spear by level-up right now. Otherwise that part seems fine. TMs are nice and small, but why doesn't it learn Shadow Ball and it doesn't learn any HMs? Dig also seems like a strange move to exclude. For the misc stuff, what is its species and its height and weight in Meters / Kilograms? Also it seems like more tutor moves than this could fit.
Yay for being critical, is a fine Pokemon though, thought I'd approve it at first but heh.
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Post by Salient on Jun 7, 2015 0:44:36 GMT 1
Snaquaza: Canice is based on a wolf, which run about 37mph. I made the stat comparing it to Arcanine's, which is pretty fast considering how large it is (95 base speed), and Canice is much more limber. It has a high special attack stat due to...reasons unknown, I also made this comparing it to Arcanine's. I'll lower it if needed. Dig I don't know why I didn't add it, and Shadow Ball I forgot. I'll add those two in. As for HMs: Cut: eh, I've never seen a wolf cut down a tree... Fly: omg flying wolf :DDDD (no) Surf: .-. Strength: No canine Pokemon has learned Strength, excluding Arcanine. Canice is supposed to be slender, not large. Waterfall: ._. Rock Smash: Again, I'm pretty sure Wolves can't smash rocks. Dive: .____. Finished adding KG/Meters stuff, didn't remember to do that. Icicle Spear, well... I may have forgotten to delete that once Varasha (it's split evo) was deleted, as I wanted it to do more with icicles. Changed it with Foul Play instead. As for tutor moves, I updated them a little, but aside from what I wrote, I honestly don't know what to add.
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Post by Salient on Jun 7, 2015 19:58:47 GMT 1
*waits patiently for Snaquaza to respond*
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Post by Salient on Jun 11, 2015 22:22:50 GMT 1
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Post by jaywad on Jun 12, 2015 7:20:18 GMT 1
Cut actually makes sense to me, but you're right, the others are just wrong . A normal wolf wouldn't be able to cut, sure, but this is part dark and has larger claws than before. It should be able to learn it since cuts aren't just for trees. Cuts can be caused on a pokemon, so it's possible as a move
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Post by Snaquaza on Jun 12, 2015 22:23:13 GMT 1
It seems like it's good to accept. Why did you change from Normal / Ice to just Ice? I don't oppose it, just curious.
Also what would you think of making it evolve at night at level 26 or higher? Would make sense in my opinion. After this I'll approve I think.
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Post by Salient on Jun 13, 2015 21:12:10 GMT 1
SnaquazaI like the idea of it evolving at night. I'll change it. I changed the typing because it was originally (when it had a split evo) going to lose the normal typing and go to dark or fairy, but I changed it once I decided against it. The normal typing didn't seen to fit after the change so I removed it.
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Post by Dylas on Jun 15, 2015 7:22:34 GMT 1
Salient, I really love the idea for this fakemon. I love how the evolving is like Amaura's evolving method. Great line of pokemon Imo!
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