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Post by remcoaz on Jun 14, 2015 19:35:17 GMT 1
Name: Frostbiter
Type: Ice
Category: Physical
PP: 15 (base) 24 (max)
Power: 90
Accuracy: 100%
Priority: 0
Target: Adjacent
Makes Contact: Yes
Description: The user crashes into the opponent and tries to freeze the target. This also damages the user a bit.
Secondary Effect: Yes, this move has 10% to freeze the target
Recoil: 1/4 of damage done
Affected by Protect: Yes
Affected by Magic Coat: No
Affected by Snatch: No
Affected by King's Rock: Yes
Affected by BrightPowder: Yes
Signature Move: No
Pokemon: Mainly Ice types
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Post by /CodedGryph/ on Jun 14, 2015 19:38:05 GMT 1
Hm... the Freeze rate seems a bit too high.... Also why does it say it isnt affected by Protect?
As a final note, this attack reminds me of Zap Cannon and Inferno. You could make it into a freeze version, instead.
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Post by sybskuh on Jun 14, 2015 19:39:38 GMT 1
I think if the freeze rate is a bit dropped it would be good
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Post by youngkingpat on Jun 14, 2015 19:42:13 GMT 1
Yeah I think that's too high. Freeze is annoying and game ruining as it is
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Post by remcoaz on Jun 14, 2015 19:42:51 GMT 1
Whoops, the unaffected by protect was a mistake! The freeze rate is lowered by 10% and the power is a bit higher.
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Post by /CodedGryph/ on Jun 14, 2015 19:47:40 GMT 1
Description: The user crashes into the opponent and tries to freeze the target. Thinking of it a bit better, you could make this move a bit mor reminiscent of an Ice Type Flare Blitz (the crash part makes it sounds as if there is recoil in this move.) My suggestion would make it Base 90 damage, with 20 percent recoil and give it 10 percent freeze chance. |
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Post by remcoaz on Jun 14, 2015 20:04:12 GMT 1
Never thought of that... I like it! I will change it right away!
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Twix
Charmeleon
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Post by Twix on Jun 14, 2015 22:56:08 GMT 1
You're only allowed to submit 1 move at a time. I'd suggest holding off on one of them until one gets the okay or discredited.
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Post by jaywad on Jun 15, 2015 19:07:48 GMT 1
To add to that above ^^^ Frostbite is an accepted ability already, so you should change the move's name to something else
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Post by Tazonite on Jun 23, 2015 22:58:02 GMT 1
I'm assuming the Freeze chance has been changed, since it's just 10%. My big issue is that it's just an Ice type Take Down. I'll admit that it is pretty useful though, as it's more powerful than both Icicle Crash and Ice Punch. It looks pretty good though. The recoil is the only thing I personally dislike. Maybe change the name too. It sounds kinda dumb to me. I'm not a great namer either though. Maybe Chill Charge?
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The Run
Charmeleon
Always ballin'
Posts: 117 
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Post by The Run on Jun 26, 2015 1:36:40 GMT 1
I like the move so far, the recoil just concerns me. Maybe reduce it to 30%?
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Post by Psych on Jun 26, 2015 4:06:53 GMT 1
This is pretty much just an Ice type Take Down. Ice needs more viability, but this also needs a niche imo.
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Post by sybskuh on Jun 26, 2015 5:37:41 GMT 1
I like the move so far, the recoil just concerns me. Maybe reduce it to 30%? 30% is more then 1/4 kek |
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The Run
Charmeleon
Always ballin'
Posts: 117
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Post by The Run on Jun 26, 2015 5:40:45 GMT 1
Oh nevermind then, miscalculations. I was thinking 60%
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