Rock Control

[stazz]

Ok, here goes nothing.
Rock Control
Power:120
Type:Rock
The user controls the rocks and throws them at the foe with psychic energy.
Type of Move:Special
Side Effects:20% Chance to Paralyze And It Will Confuse First Turn You Use It
Pokemon Who Could Learn it: Lileep, Cradily, Solrock, Lunatone, Amaura, Aurorus, Carbink and Diance.
Accuracy:90
Does Not Make Contact
PP:5(base) 8(max)
Does Not Break Through Protect
Affected By Both Kings Rock And Bright Powder

[kekecleon]

Welcome to the Kyoru Project stazz! You can remove the "NOT Affected by Soundproof" through "NOT Affected by Bulletproof" because you only need to put those in the information if they do affect your move. Here are some of my concerns:

-Why does it Paralyze?
-Maybe you should lower down the PP to 5(Base) 8(Max).
-Probably add in a description of the move.

Those are the main things that concern me. I might have to look over the move's balance, but other that it's a good start!n_n

[stazz]

Thanks for the feedback and helping me make my first move! I really appreciate it!

[Twix]

I really see no need for this move at all, since a few special rock moves are in progress. QC Reject 1/2

[stazz]

Ok I understand. Thanks for the feedback regardless!

[Twix]

Snaquaza, the user has requested that this thread be locked so he can work on another move.