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Post by Psych on Jun 23, 2015 0:52:45 GMT 1
I've edited those things.
I've also completely re-edited the move and made it Bug-type. Without the Poison effect (which made the move what it was) there is no need for this to be Poison anymore. Bug types needed some love as far as a priority move, so this isn't a huge game changer.
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Post by silverwhiteblue on Jun 23, 2015 6:20:57 GMT 1
I think Galom's comment came from the sting part, as bugs sting and not poison. Had u kept it toxin or needle related perhaps keeping it poison would been better. Then again, at the game playing level, bug types need the offensive priority more
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Post by jaywad on Jun 23, 2015 14:21:54 GMT 1
What Pokemon do u consider giving it to? I wouldn't put alot of Pokemon though, only ones like scolipede and beedrill should get it imo.
That said. I am loving the idea to make bugs a little more special with this move!
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Post by Psych on Jun 23, 2015 14:26:01 GMT 1
Yeah, I really am only giving it to pokemon with the ability to sting (to keep the flavor of the move). I edited the potential users on the page to cut down on Seviper and Arbok.
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Post by blackburn009 on Jun 23, 2015 14:49:44 GMT 1
Make it affected by kings rock now it has no secondary effect
Just realized that this would be perfect for Ubers ariados instead of shadow sneak
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Post by Psych on Jun 24, 2015 3:29:31 GMT 1
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Post by Twix on Jun 24, 2015 3:40:32 GMT 1
Psych Fix the description and add both the max and minimum PP.
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Post by Psych on Jun 24, 2015 3:50:10 GMT 1
completed, have also freshened it up to make the submission look nicer.
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Post by silverwhiteblue on Jun 24, 2015 8:11:42 GMT 1
It seems like a pretty nice move now, so i've got nothing more to add the name isnt ideal yet but it's good. The chosen pokemon are pretty nice as well! well done
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Post by Psych on Jun 27, 2015 13:57:07 GMT 1
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Post by Snaquaza on Jun 27, 2015 15:50:55 GMT 1
I guess it's fine QC 1/2
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Post by Twix on Jun 27, 2015 18:09:40 GMT 1
The PP should actually be 30 and maximum 48 as it matches other priority moves of its type such as Mach Punch, Quick Attack, and Shadow Sneak. Other than that, everything seems fine. Approved 2/2
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Post by Rhythms on Jun 27, 2015 22:39:14 GMT 1
"swiftsting": {
num: -211,
accuracy: 100,
basePower: 40,
category: "Physical",
desc: "The user quickly stings the target with it's stinger.",
shortDesc: "Usually goes first.",
id: "swiftsting",
name: "Swift Sting",
pp: 30,
priority: 1,
flags: {protect: 1, mirror: 1},
secondary: false,
target: "normal",
type: "bug"
},"bug" should be capitalized in the desc, change "it's" to "its" "it's" is an acronym for "it is," and "its" shows ownership. i would PM you on PS but i frankly dont want to |
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Post by Ruby on Jul 1, 2015 16:59:48 GMT 1
Capitalizing doesn't matter in type: "bug"
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Post by Rhythms on Jul 1, 2015 17:53:11 GMT 1
Capitalizing doesn't matter in type: "bug" I know, but I would just prefer the code to be consistent |
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