[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Final Act

[Kim BC]

Final Act

Name: Final Act 

Type: Ghost

Category: Physical
PP: 5 (base) 8 (max)
Power: 120
Accuracy: 100%
Priority: 0
Target: Adjacent (Choose 1)
Makes Contact: No

Description: The user gives it's final blow onto the opponent.

Secondary Effect: Attack and Special Attack are lowered by one stage. ~Stats go back to nuetral if encored.
Affected by Protect: Yes
Affected by Magic Coat: No
Affected by Snatch: No
Affected by King's Rock: Yes
Affected by Bright Powder: Yes

Signature: No

Pokemon: Golurk, Forslass, Banette, Mismagius, Dusknoir, Sableye, Gourgeist Spiritomb, Hoopa, Giritina, Arceus, Any pokemon you suggest down below and Fakemons

[evilklefki]

1 op 2 Nerf that damn pp lol. that's it.

[evilklefki]

also, desc a lil too dark for pokemon imo

[Psych]

Not a terrible idea, it's slightly Overpowered but Ghost needs an OP move imo. Ghost only has 1 move above 100 BP and it's Shadow Force (A 2 turn move). I quite like this.

[TheBlueFiretruck]

Why does the Pokémon need to make amends in order to call upon the power of past lives? I don't really get where the name and description come from. The move itself is not overpowered; it's a Ghost-type Fire Blast. Unlike Fire Blast, the Ghost typing has no Flamethrower-esque move to compete with this one, which completely outclasses Shadow Ball atm. The flinch doesn't really make sense, but I see how you were trying to match Fire Blast's 10% burn.

[Kim BC]

Jul 4, 2015 20:22:18 GMT 1 TheBlueFiretruck said:

Why does the Pokémon need to make amends in order to call upon the power of past lives? I don't really get where the name and description come from. The move itself is not overpowered; it's a Ghost-type Fire Blast. Unlike Fire Blast, the Ghost typing has no Flamethrower-esque move to compete with this one, which completely outclasses Shadow Ball atm. The flinch doesn't really make sense, but I see how you were trying to match Fire Blast's 10% burn.

It doesn't need to make amends to call past lives, it calls past lives to make amends for their wrong doing and to grant them their power:/. The 10 percent chance to flinch is equivalent to fire blast's burn blizzard's freeze and thunder's paralysis. Since no other op move had a flinch rate, i thought it would be a good idea to give it to this one. If someone were about to get demolished by a powerful and scary attack, I think they would flinch. No other status really fits besides flinch. Also, majority of ghost types are special so this move doesn't really outclass shadow ball. Shadow ball will still have more usage.

[TheBlueFiretruck]

Jul 4, 2015 20:53:15 GMT 1 Kim BC said:

Jul 4, 2015 20:22:18 GMT 1 TheBlueFiretruck said:

Why does the Pokémon need to make amends in order to call upon the power of past lives? I don't really get where the name and description come from. The move itself is not overpowered; it's a Ghost-type Fire Blast. Unlike Fire Blast, the Ghost typing has no Flamethrower-esque move to compete with this one, which completely outclasses Shadow Ball atm. The flinch doesn't really make sense, but I see how you were trying to match Fire Blast's 10% burn.

It doesn't need to make amends to call past lives, it calls past lives to make amends for their wrong doing and to grant them their power:/. The 10 percent chance to flinch is equivalent to fire blast's burn blizzard's freeze and thunder's paralysis. Since no other op move had a flinch rate, i thought it would be a good idea to give it to this one. If someone were about to get demolished by a powerful and scary attack, I think they would flinch. No other status really fits besides flinch. Also, majority of ghost types are special so this move doesn't really outclass shadow ball. Shadow ball will still have more usage.

I assumed this was Special, as the three other moves you are basing this off of are Special, sorry about that. I saw in the Kyoru chat that you thought my last comment came off as judgmental; I'm very sorry you felt that way and I wasn't trying to be mean. I just didn't understand what the move does, and it seems kind of complicated for a Pokémon description. With a little touching up I think this would be a great move ^.^

[Kim BC]

Lol, im not upset, I just didn't know the right word to use so I use judgemental. Also, you're right, this move could use some work. Now that I think about it, maybe it should be like flare blitz instead of fire blast idk. It seems more fitting and a right now the move seems a bit misleading. @ TheBlueFiretruck

[txnnyo]

I think the move is okay and that dark description though. It's like a ghost counterpart to Blizzard/Thunder/FireBlast. I think Spiritomb/ZoruaLine/HonedgeLine/Trevenant and others should get this move as well :]

[Hannahh]

I really like the general idea of a stronger, physical ghost move like this. (Especially because I'm a heavily offensive battler, and I tend to use physical moves more for whatever reason.)

I'm wondering what you mean by "Should it be flare blitz instead of fire blast?" What would it really chance? I really do like the 8PP portion, since it is a pretty strong move. But, maybe move it to 12 or 16, if you're mimicking the flare blitz? 24 seems like too many.

I really like everything else about it, including the dark description which matches really well with the typing. (ghost, duh)

Hope this helped a tiny bit?

As for other pokemon: 

• Litwick family
• Gastly family (Which you may have mentioned, not sure.)
• Phantump Family
• Pumpkaboo Family

These may already have been added, so I'm not sure if this was a necessary edit, now...

[Kim BC]

Jul 5, 2015 4:20:24 GMT 1 Hannahh said:

I really like the general idea of a stronger, physical ghost move like this. (Especially because I'm a heavily offensive battler, and I tend to use physical moves more for whatever reason.)

I'm wondering what you mean by "Should it be flare blitz instead of fire blast?" What would it really chance? I really do like the 8PP portion, since it is a pretty strong move. But, maybe move it to 12 or 16, if you're mimicking the flare blitz? 24 seems like too many.

I really like everything else about it, including the dark description which matches really well with the typing. (ghost, duh)

Hope this helped a tiny bit?

As for other pokemon: 

• Litwick family
• Gastly family (Which you may have mentioned, not sure.)
• Phantump Family
• Pumpkaboo Family

These may already have been added, so I'm not sure if this was a necessary edit, now...

What I mean by making it like flare blitz is instead of 110 BP, 10 percent chance to flinch, and 85 perecent accuracy like fire blast, make it 120 BP, 100 percent accuracy and have recoil like flare blitz.

[Hannahh]

Ah, okay. I do like the idea, since it's physical like Flare Blitz. I think you should, then.

@kim BC (Did that work?)

[silverwhiteblue]

I definitly agree that the description doesnt really belong to pokemon much, and the secondary effect is a bit misplaced. it can be a hydro cannon copy, or 10% lowering a stat. But im all for a strong ghost type move

[Kim BC]

Jul 5, 2015 4:48:40 GMT 1 Hannahh said:

Ah, okay. I do like the idea, since it's physical like Flare Blitz. I think you should, then.

@kim BC (Did that work?)

No.

[Kim BC]

Jul 5, 2015 6:12:24 GMT 1 silverwhiteblue said:

I definitly agree that the description doesnt really belong to pokemon much, and the secondary effect is a bit misplaced. it can be a hydro cannon copy, or 10% lowering a stat. But im all for a strong ghost type move

If I made this move like hydro cannon, nobody would use it at all like Frenzy Plant and Blast Burn. I want something actually viable for physical ghosts. I think you met hydro pump but I'm still going to point that out incase you didn't. Also, I don't see how the description doesn't fit tbh. It perfectly fits a dark description for the right typing, ghost. I wanted something original and creative and that doesn't come out of the shadows (shadow punch, sneak, claw, force, and ball) because gamefreak apparently have no good ideas for a good ghost move without it pertaining to shadows. Ghosts are more than shadows, they're the dead of the living and deserve to be feared. If this description is just too dark and descriptive, I could turn it down a tad.

[silverwhiteblue]

Yes i did man a hydro pump clone there, my bad which is still a good idea. While i agree that what you did goes in an original boundary, it the direction of "past lives" that i disagree with. I mean for exampl i dont see how they can put that in the anime as animation. Maybe yo can make it generate small ghosts ( like many with green/red glowing eyes, and they all swarm in an attack, that sorta style) as i think it might fit pokemon better without actually changing the concept of the move, and making it seem less "dark"

[Kim BC]

Jul 6, 2015 6:23:00 GMT 1 silverwhiteblue said:

Yes i did man a hydro pump clone there, my bad which is still a good idea. While i agree that what you did goes in an original boundary, it the direction of "past lives" that i disagree with. I mean for exampl i dont see how they can put that in the anime as animation. Maybe yo can make it generate small ghosts ( like many with green/red glowing eyes, and they all swarm in an attack, that sorta style) as i think it might fit pokemon better without actually changing the concept of the move, and making it seem less "dark"

I love that idea

[silverwhiteblue]

Glad to have helped then! I dont really have my way with descriptions so i'll leave that up to you, if you decide to go with this idea. goodluck

[Kim BC]

Tagging Galom and Snaquaza for QCs if you have time. ^-^

[colester112]

OMG thats terrifying and great at the same time great job with that move! I could see like yamask and cofagrigus using it!

[The Run]

This move would fit Giratina the best and its a really interesting and OP move!

[Kim BC]

Almost a month later after tagging for QCs :<

[The Run]

Aug 20, 2015 17:45:39 GMT 1 Kim BC said:

Almost a month later after tagging for QCs :<

Um sorry for the inconvenience, I'm sure the Kyoru Forum staff are working on it so please be patient a bit longer, ok? ^_^

[Salient]

I really like this. The physical side of ghost types could really use a buff, and this makes sense since the flavor is "summoning spirits to attack the target". Maybe we could give it to more Pokemon, too. Will definitely be giving it to Devoxys and I's Schrodinger cat fakemon.

Approved 1/2.

Tagging kizzo212 and chundermunch (I already tagged Devoxys)

[chundermunch]

Dont like the name