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Post by rexthegamer on Feb 1, 2016 17:40:16 GMT 1
Name: Radiation Type: Fire Category: Special PP: Base: 5 Max: 10 Power: 120 Accuracy: 85% Priority: 0 Target: Single target Makes Contact: The Fakemon doesn't make contact Description: The user emits blasts of radiation. Secondary Effect: The type of the move has a 70% chance of changing for the duration of the game. *(This is due to Radiation having the ability to mutate cells ect, so i thought this could work with my idea to have the move change type.) Affected by Protect: No it is not affected Affected by Magic Coat: No it is not affected Affected by Snatch: No it is not affected Affected by King's Rock: Yes it is affected Affected by BrightPowder: Yes it is affected
Affected by Bulletproof: No Signature Move: No Pokemon: Which Pokemon can learn this move? Fakemon, Volcanic pokemon, ie Camarupt, Volcarano, Flammoxis, Salandit, Heatmor, Heatran.
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Post by rexthegamer on Feb 1, 2016 20:04:06 GMT 1
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Cyberknight98
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Feb 1, 2016 20:15:04 GMT 1
I like the idea, but it's a bit underpowered as of now. Change the Maximum PP to 24, first of all. If you want the -1 priority drawback, at least make it 90-100% accurate and lower the BST to 100
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Post by rexthegamer on Feb 1, 2016 20:19:54 GMT 1
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Feb 1, 2016 21:50:36 GMT 1
You can't have Protect be 50% effective. It's either all or nothing. You COULD make it break through protect, which would fit thematically. But to do this, I'd suggest lowering the PP to 10 and 16 Max, and possibly lowering the BST to 90.
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Post by rexthegamer on Feb 1, 2016 22:35:42 GMT 1
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Feb 2, 2016 19:11:42 GMT 1
I mean... it's not my move, mang. You can decide how you want it and get it approved yourself. I was just giving some suggestions. Don't feel like I'm controlling YOUR move. I will tag Devoxys and Salient for their thoughts.
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Post by rexthegamer on Feb 2, 2016 19:34:05 GMT 1
Cyberknight98 All of my ideas are mine but i don't mind using other peoples ideas into it aswell <3
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Post by Devoxys on Feb 2, 2016 21:47:24 GMT 1
I feel that this is to similar to the moves Meteor Mash, Iron Tail, and Iron Head. They all have have similar BP and accuracy, and are Physical. Plus, despite not having contact, those Pokemon would prefer having a better priority. What you could do is make it is a Sky Attack clone, maybe that would make it more interesting.
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Post by rexthegamer on Feb 2, 2016 22:11:08 GMT 1
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Post by Devoxys on Feb 2, 2016 22:36:58 GMT 1
It's underpowered. Make the BP at least 120.
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Post by rexthegamer on Feb 2, 2016 22:50:34 GMT 1
Devoxys did it and i did my fakemon, btw the hatch time was really hard to work out, i might have done it wrong, sorry if i have
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Post by pokemonvortex on Feb 4, 2016 1:00:22 GMT 1
Cannonball is one word by the way. Then again, Ramparados is the Head Butt Pokemon, but that's a species name. Headbutt is also one word.
Also, make the description "sound" like a description. How about, "The user charges (its shot the first turn), then fires a bomb/ball of steel/cannonball on the next turn." I mean, you can make it into anything you want.
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Feb 25, 2016 17:23:04 GMT 1
If it's going to be a two-turn move with 120 BP, at least make it 100% accuracy. The most notable 2-turn attacks have 140 BP, and are signature to the Kyurem forms.
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Post by kizzo212 on Mar 5, 2016 18:50:54 GMT 1
I'd say to increase the BP to 140, and drop the accuracy to 90% to make it similar to moves like sky attack, as I wouldn't see this having 100% accuracy anyway.
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Post by rexthegamer on May 14, 2016 19:54:01 GMT 1
Bump!
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on May 16, 2016 23:05:54 GMT 1
10 extra damage? ...That's it? Anyways, I'm not super sure why Voidare should get a signature ghost move, especially since we have Shadow Assault...
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Post by rexthegamer on Aug 2, 2016 17:35:53 GMT 1
Bump
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Post by Devoxys on Aug 2, 2016 21:30:41 GMT 1
Plasma Cannon sounds like Zap Cannon/Flash Cannon, both name-wise and concept-wise.
Plus, there's no reason why this move would be able to change the opponents type.
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Post by rexthegamer on Aug 19, 2016 15:05:50 GMT 1
Bump, changed the move slightly/
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Post by Salient on Aug 19, 2016 17:19:09 GMT 1
Eh. Imo make this an ability called "Radioactive", while the Pokemon is out of the user takes increasing amounts of damage. Would have to make the ability signature to a pokemon that's weak af but it's creative
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Post by Devoxys on Aug 19, 2016 22:31:42 GMT 1
Plus, the type of radiation you are suggesting with this move fits better as a poison-type move.
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Post by Salient on Aug 20, 2016 2:26:14 GMT 1
Apparently my last post didn't make sense, so here it is rephrased:
In my opinion, make this an ability called "Radioactive" and its effect should be that when its on the battlefield, the opponent takes an increasing amount of damage (6.25, 12.5, 25% etc.). The ability would have to be on a super weak Pokemon (makes sense if it's suffering from radiation poisoning), or make the user take damage as well (with no form recovery, including leftovers?)
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Post by pokemonvortex on Sept 1, 2016 22:27:01 GMT 1
Most abilities are nouns so I think Radiation is fine.
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