Dylas
Charmeleon
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Post by Dylas on Jun 14, 2015 7:50:52 GMT 1
Charyvern (Based off of en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charybdis ) The Whirlpool PokemonType: Water/Dragon Stats: 85/50/70/105/90/75 (BST: 475) Ability: Swift Swim/(HA) Water Absorb Pokedex Entry:"Charyverns trap their prey using strong whirlpools. They are nearly impossible to escape from."
Moveset: (By level up)Start: Bubble Start: Tail Whip Lv 5: Water Gun Lv 9: Dragon Breath Lv 15: Whirlpool Lv 21: Bite Lv 25: Dragon Rage Lv 29: Slam Lv 33: Water Pulse Lv 40: Rain Dance Lv 45: Aqua Ring Lv 48: Crunch Lv 52: Mean Look Lv 54: Body Slam Lv 57: Aqua Jet Lv 62: Hydro Pump Lv 65: Dragon Rush By Tm:Tm 05: Roar Tm 06: Toxic Tm 10: Hidden Power Tm 12: Taunt Tm 13: Ice Beam Tm 14:Blizzard Tm 15: Hyper Beam Tm 17: Protect Tm 18: Rain Dance Tm 26: Earthquake Tm 27: Return Tm 32: Double Team Tm 41: Torment Tm 42: Facade Tm 44: Rest Tm 45: Attract Tm 48: Round Tm 52: Focus Blast Tm 55: Scald Tm 67: Retaliate Tm 68: Giga Impact Tm 80: Rock Slide Tm 82: Dragon Tail Tm 87: Swagger Tm 90: Substitute Tm 94: Secret Power Tm 95: Snarl Tm 100: Confide By Hm:Surf Waterfall Dive By Tutor:Draco Meteor Snore Water Pulse Dual Chop Endeavor Iron Tail Bounce Aqua Tail Dragon Pulse Outrage Icy Wind Egg Moves:Muddy Water Soak Agility Iron Head Dragon Dance Misc Info:
Gender Ratio: 100% Female Egg Groups: Water 1/Dragon Hatch Time: 18 Egg Cycles (4590 Steps) Height: 8.7 Feet Weight: 357 lbs Catch Rate: 50 Base Experience Yield: 204 Leveling Rate: Medium Slow EV Yield: 2 Sp.A Body Type:
 Footprint: None Pokedex Color: Blue Base Friendship: 35 Species: Whirlpool Pokemon Design: Thanks to Drop the Based i.imgur.com/ozcR8vD.jpgSnaquaza Ace Galom |
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Post by jaywad on Jun 14, 2015 8:06:07 GMT 1
Ok, so far i like the idea of a water-dragon mythical beast as a mon. but...can u explain its reason for having 75%male and 25%female?
Also, is this gonna have a pre-evo or this is it?
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Dylas
Charmeleon
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Post by Dylas on Jun 14, 2015 8:08:10 GMT 1
Fixed it. I don't know why I did that. Also, nope. It has no Pre-Evolution
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Post by Hawkie on Jun 14, 2015 13:49:02 GMT 1
It's level-up movepool needs to be expanded, take a look at other non-evolving Pokemon for a good idea of roughly how many you should give it. Otherwise, I really like the concept and the beast it's based upon. I'll be glad to take another look once you've fleshed out the idea.
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Post by Snaquaza on Jun 14, 2015 17:48:12 GMT 1
You need to submit new abilities first. This Pokemon looks good otherwise, but please submit the ability, although I have to say that I'd prefer a more general Water-type ability. This is kinda boring and could be considered too good.
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Post by Galom on Jun 14, 2015 23:28:04 GMT 1
Also fix the double spacing.
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Dylas
Charmeleon
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Post by Dylas on Jun 15, 2015 0:47:22 GMT 1
Snaquaza I changed the abilities. Galom I fixed the Double Spacing.
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Post by Devoxys on Jun 15, 2015 1:39:02 GMT 1
I think he means is that its just a somewhat generic Water/Dragon Pokemon.
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Post by Hounds on Jun 15, 2015 2:56:46 GMT 1
I think the mon looks pretty good. You might consider adding the TM and HM #s.
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Dylas
Charmeleon
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Post by Dylas on Jun 15, 2015 2:58:31 GMT 1
I felt as if tm Number didn't matter as much. It isn't as important as Level Up moves needing levels.
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Post by Galom on Jun 15, 2015 4:04:02 GMT 1
The stats and details look pretty good now, but I'd like to either have a text description of the mon or a simple sketch of what it looks like (since I really have no idea what you're getting at here) before approving.
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Dylas
Charmeleon
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Post by Dylas on Jun 15, 2015 4:05:31 GMT 1
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Post by Galom on Jun 15, 2015 4:34:53 GMT 1
Beautiful concept. I just want Ace and Snaquaza to give their opinions before I stamp; my only fear is it being a bit too similar to Kingdra, but I don't think it's too close. |
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Post by msgardevoir on Jun 15, 2015 7:13:01 GMT 1
I think it looks great!
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Dylas
Charmeleon
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Post by Dylas on Jun 15, 2015 7:15:17 GMT 1
Thanks Gardevoir n_n
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Post by Ace on Jun 15, 2015 21:12:15 GMT 1
Everything looks up to standard, please add a description/sketch of the Pokemons design, though. I just want to know how you're visualizing this. After you do that and if I like it, I'll stamp.
Edit: I'm blind. Approved 1/3. Love the sketch.
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Dylas
Charmeleon
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Post by Dylas on Jun 15, 2015 21:43:57 GMT 1
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Post by Galom on Jun 16, 2015 1:57:25 GMT 1
Approved 2/3, beautifully done. Milotic has some competition.
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Dylas
Charmeleon
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Post by Dylas on Jun 16, 2015 2:03:57 GMT 1
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txnnyo
Charmeleon
you forgot your floaties...
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Post by txnnyo on Jun 16, 2015 2:12:43 GMT 1
:0 looks like kingdra and milotic made some new awesome hybrid baby
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Post by Snaquaza on Jun 16, 2015 8:06:07 GMT 1
I am just wondering why it learns Recover. Also, the TM numbers WILL have to be added, even if you do it after it gets accepted. Glare is a snake move and 60 is not a base friendship value. It's either 70 or 35, iirc.
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Post by Snaquaza on Jun 16, 2015 8:30:09 GMT 1
I guess it looks fine now. Sorry if I forgot anything, accepted 3/3
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Ruby
Charmeleon
reKt
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Post by Ruby on Jul 6, 2015 12:17:13 GMT 1
Reserving this
Will be my next Pokemon after Pankopaw
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Post by Devoxys on Jun 30, 2016 21:57:09 GMT 1
Base EXP Yield is 166.
The level-up move levels need to be redone to follow a pattern.
Don't give this Dual Chop (no hands lol)
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