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Post by Devoxys on Jun 28, 2015 20:33:19 GMT 1
Fly Trap
This is a revival of an old ability I made named "Carnivorous" that was locked so that I can remake it as a move. So here we go!
Fly Trap: Type: Grass BP: 70 PP: 20 (Max. 32) Acc: 100% Seconday Effect: Super Effective on Bug Types Physical Makes Contact Hits one Adjacent Pokemon Affected by Protect Affected by King's Rock Affected by BrightPowder Description: The user uses sweet scents to attract a foe, then suddenly attacks them. Pokemon: Carnivine, Bellsprout, Weepinbel, Victreebel, Fakemon (anyone? tell me)
Grass Type Physical Freeze-Dry. This is a move that is given to Pokemon that are based off of carnivorous plants, so it is super-effective against Bug-Types.
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Post by Psych on Jun 28, 2015 20:59:20 GMT 1
Would this be a 2-turn move? The sweet scent then closing in the mouth seem like 2 different actions. I think that might be the best way to go with this move.
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Post by Secreton on Jun 28, 2015 21:05:30 GMT 1
Seems powerful, and kinda outclasses power whip. Since it has low distribution, it's probably fine, since bug types aren't too common, though freeze dry is 70 BP and has about the same amount of distribution.
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Post by Devoxys on Jun 28, 2015 21:08:51 GMT 1
Psych, the sweet scent thing explains how it corresponds to real life. Insects are attracted by the nectar, and then they fall for the trap. The sweet scent would already be there, so no. Secreton, lowered BP to 100.
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Post by Flerovium on Jun 28, 2015 21:11:59 GMT 1
I love this. I feel it adds at least something to the fairly weak Grass-type, and it's based off something which occurs in real life. I still think the base power should be lowered just a tad more, however, maybe to 90, or 95 even?
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Post by The Run on Jun 28, 2015 21:13:55 GMT 1
For a BP of 100, having 20 PP is way too much. I suggest putting it down to 10. This move sorta of reminds me of Solarbeam where the user takes in energy then blasts the 2nd turn. Its a really good move, although I still agree with Psych about it being better off as a 2-turn move.
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Post by Devoxys on Jun 28, 2015 21:26:32 GMT 1
I nerfed the BP to 90, I was unsure about the BP anyway. I prefer lowering the BP than making this a 2-turn move.
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Post by Psych on Jun 28, 2015 21:28:48 GMT 1
I'm cool with this being a 1-turn move if you nerf the BP like you did.
If it's above 100 I say 2-turn.
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Post by silverwhiteblue on Jun 29, 2015 5:15:47 GMT 1
I think It should be a freeze dry clone. that's generally how gamefreak sets their "same idea different type" move. I Do love the idea however, but the name isnt ideal
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Post by Devoxys on Jan 29, 2016 21:45:03 GMT 1
I have decided to revive this!
Go vote in the poll.
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Post by kizzo212 on Feb 9, 2016 16:36:58 GMT 1
It's actually a neat idea. Would give carnivine and victreebel some way to hit steel/bug types etc. Kinda a shame that a lot of bug types are also poison or flying type, but would still help a bit, being stronger than return or something at least. What I don't quite understand is the actual physical practicality, like this move would still do damage to a giratina, but how is a bellsprout eating a giratina?
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Post by Devoxys on Feb 9, 2016 21:59:55 GMT 1
Yeah, the physical practicality was one of my concerns about making this a move. Though, in retrospect, how would an Eevee bite a Dialga?
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Post by Devoxys on Feb 22, 2016 13:44:45 GMT 1
Poll is over, edits made. Bump.
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Post by Salient on Feb 22, 2016 16:05:53 GMT 1
I see no glaring issues with this, it's a unique move and nothing overpowered gets it. Might want someone to give this to their fakemon. Aside from that, Approved 1/2.
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Post by Devoxys on Feb 22, 2016 22:17:31 GMT 1
Thanks Salient! I should probably fix the tag.
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Post by Salient on Feb 22, 2016 23:44:26 GMT 1
Devoxys, it should be "Approved 1/2". Unless I'm missing someone's approval.
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Post by Devoxys on Feb 23, 2016 21:37:46 GMT 1
And that's what happens when you are approving something and changing titles at the same time :/. Well, I guess I'll tag kizzo212
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Post by kizzo212 on Feb 25, 2016 19:02:58 GMT 1
I guess the questionable practicality side of things is kinda irrelevant tbh. Pokemon in general barely follows any real logic or physics half the time, so no real issue. Nice original idea, with some competitive use.
Approved 2/2.
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Post by Devoxys on Feb 25, 2016 22:05:54 GMT 1
Thanks guys!
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