Seablin and Macabrak

[Dylas]

Seablin (Based off of en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goblin_shark )

"The Sea Goblin Pokemon"


Type: Water
Stats: 65/60/50/30/50/70 (BST:325)
Ability: Poison Touch/ (HA) Sheer Force
Pokedex Entry:
"Seablin are usually found deep within the ocean, traveling in schools. They prey on smaller fish and seaweed."

Moveset: (By level up)
Start: Leer
Start: Water Gun
Lv 4: Bubble
Lv 7: Bite
Lv 10: Aqua Jet
Lv 13: Bubble Beam
Lv 17: Poison Tail
Lv 21: Mean Look
Lv 25: Hyper Fang
Lv 29: Headbutt
Lv 34: Poison Fang
Lv 39: Crunch
Lv 44: Toxic Spikes
Lv 49: Hydro Pump
Lv 54: Dive

By TM:
TM06: Toxic
TM09: Venoshock
TM10: Hidden Power
TM12: Taunt
TM13: Ice Beam
TM14: Blizzard
TM17: Protect
TM18: Rain Dance
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM32: Double Team
TM41: Torment
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM46: Thief
TM48: Round
TM55: Scald
TM63: Embargo
TM66: Payback
TM84: Poison Jab
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
HM03: Surf
HM05: Waterfall
HM07: Dive

By Tutor:
Knock Off
Snore
Water Pulse
Covet
Super Fang
Endeavor
Iron Tail
Bounce
Zen Headbutt
Foul Play
Snatch
Gunk Shot

Egg Moves:
Agility
Sludge
Bubblebeam
Aqua Ring
Super Fang
Slash


Misc Info

Gender Ratio: 50/50
Egg Group: Water 1
Hatch time: 13 Egg Cycles
Height: 3ft 5in
Weight: 72Lbs
Catch Rate: 225
Base Experience Yield: 65
Leveling Rate: Medium
EV Yield: 1 Spe
Footprint: None
Pokedex Color: Purple
Base Friendship: 35

Evolves into Toxiblin at Level 37

Macabrak

The Sea Horror Pokemon

Type: Water/Poison
Stats: 90/110/70/80/60/95 (BST: 505)
Ability: Poison Touch/ (HA) Sheer Force
Dex Entry:
"Toxiblin have fangs that are capable of cutting steel beams. They can sense prey from miles away."

Moveset (By Level Up)
Start: Leer
Start: Water Gun
Start: Ice Fang
Start: Poison Fang
Lv 6: Bubble
Lv 9: Bite
Lv 14: Headbutt
Lv 20: Aqua Jet
Lv 24: Scary Face
Lv 30: Poison Tail
Lv 34: Soak
Lv 37: Mean Look
Lv 40: Headbutt
Lv 42: Hyper Fang
Lv 45: Poison Fang
Lv 48: Hydro Pump
Lv 52: Punishment
Lv 55: Toxic Spikes
Lv 58: Crunch
Lv 63: Dive

By TM:
TM06: Toxic
TM09: Venoshock
TM10: Hidden Power
TM12: Taunt
TM13: Ice Beam
TM14: Blizzard
TM15: Hyper Beam
TM17: Protect
TM18: Rain Dance
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM32: Double Team
TM34: Sludge Wave
TM36: Sludge Bomb
TM41: Torment
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM46: Thief
TM48: Round
TM55: Scald
TM63: Embargo
TM66: Payback
TM84: Poison Jab
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM97: Dark Pulse
HM03: Surf
HM05: Waterfall
HM07: Dive

By Tutor:
Knock Off
Snore
Water Pulse
Covet
Super Fang
Endeavor
Iron Tail
Bounce
Zen Headbutt
Foul Play
Snatch
Gunk Shot

Misc Info:

Gender Ratio: 50% Male/ 50% Female
Egg Group: Water 1
Height: 6ft 8in
Weight: 201lbs
Catch Rate: 60
Base Exp Yield: 177
Leveling Rate: Medium
EV Yield: 1 Atk, 1 Spe
Pokedex Color: Purple
Base Friendship: 35


Snaquaza  Psych  Galom

[The Run]

For now this isn't half bad. The moveset variety might need to be a bit larger, so I suggest using Sharpedo and Carvanha to help you with that since they are both sharks. Also since a Goblin Shark is sometimes referred to as a "Living Fossil" it would be cool to give it a Rock-type along with it. The BST both seem adequate for the pre-evolution and the evolution. So far so good, I'm looking forward to your changes and/or improvements. Also don't forget to tag this as a WIP (Work in Progress).

[Devoxys]

I know this is still very much a WIP, but on what you have right now:
-Aqua Jet level 3 and level 18?
-Writing the number or steps instead of the number of egg cycles would be better
-You need another Pokedex entry on each Fakemon
-Am I the only one that sees random "Cut the Price" things?

[Psych]

I see them as well Devoxys.

Get the movepools sorted out, look at the TM/HM List and use that to add to the movepool.

That is a very basic movepool, no "cool" moves or anything, feel free to add things like Hydro Pump, Knock Off, Gunk Shot, Dive, etc.

Overall, I'm not seeing a ton of creativity with this mon, don't feel discouraged, this thing has potential, but it has someway to go and we're here to help you make it better.

Fix the stuff suggested and re-tag some of us and we can come back and provide feedback.

[Leafeon]

I would like to see brine added to the movepool as well
As galom said before we have seen rough skin on every single shark to date.
Add the fang moves like hyper fang,ice fang etc
everything else has been said by the people above me.

[Dylas]

I took in all of your suggestions. Snaquaza Psych Galom please check

[Snaquaza]

I like this. Approved 1/3

Maybe cut the level-up movepool a bit from the second evo. It goes up quite high and irregularly. A move after 2 moves after level 50 is kind of insane.

[chundermunch]

I love that you chose to go Water/Poison instead of Water/Dark. A few nitpicks however-
1. Your dex entries need improvements. "They are good hunters isn't a way you should be ending a dex entries "
2. Why does it not get waterfall
3. Also I don't reaaally like rough skin on this pokemon. I think something like Poison Touch or Poison Point will be better suited to its character.
4. Finish Tm movepool ofc

Its looking good though! Just patch it up and retag the council
Good Luck~

[Galom]

Swift Swim is kind of boring, I'd rather see something a bit more creative, but for now I can accept it. Consider changing it, please.

Approved 2/3.

[Dylas]

Thanks! Now all I need is Psych

[jaywad]

Psych wanna take a look at this?

[kizzo212]

All in all, it seems like a good standard mon. level-up/tutor Movepool and abilities seem reasonable (aside from TMs, which still need to be added), stat distributions are suitable. Just a couple of things to point out:
- Maybe the dex entries could be made more interesting (at least for Seablin), as they are a bit generic, but they seem fine for now.
- Base exp yield for Seablin should be 65, and for Toxiblin should be 177
- Catch rate of 50 is fine for Seablin, but maybe it should be a bit higher for Toxiblin?
- Usually Pokemon get a bit more than 4 egg moves, so maybe see if there is anything else you can add. Look at Carvanha's for inspiration.
- The names are nice but maybe you could have a see if you could maybe make them a bit more interesting? Having "Sea" in a water type's name is maybe a bit overdone and "toxi" also seems to be a pretty dull way of adding something into a poison type's name. They are probably fine as they are, but it's something worth considering imo.

[Salient]

The level up moves are a bit sporadic, please fix that.

Nvm. I was just counting wrong. Love the concept though :]

Nope. I was counting right, the moves are sporadic.
right now the increments for seablin are 2. 4, 6, 5, 6, 5, 3, 2, 7, 3, 3, 3, 2
Salient edits:
Oh also Dylas , it learns headbutt twice dunno if that's on purpose

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Start: Leer
Start: Water Gun
Lv 4: Bubble
Lv 7: Bite
Lv 10: Headbutt
Lv 13: Aqua Jet
Lv 17: Poison Tail
Lv 21: Mean Look
Lv 25: Hyper Fang
Lv 29: Headbutt
Lv 34: Poison Fang
Lv 39: Hydro Pump
Lv 44: Toxic Spikes
Lv 49: Crunch
Lv 54: Dive

with my edits increments are now 3,3,3,3,4,4,4,4,5,5,5,5,5. Think it might learn too many moves as a prevo, maybe remove dive and put crunch at level 29 instead of headbutt?
I like the name Seablin, but as kizzo said toxiblin could still use some work. 
And Toxiblin's tm and hm movepool are still "TBA".

Once those are done I can approve. : ]

[Devoxys]

Use Spe instead of Spd for Speed.

The catch rates can be a bit bigger.

Fix that, then Approved (forgot how many approvals this has lol)

[Salient]

For Seablin:
-Add Poison to its typing.
-Remove from tutor moves: Knock Off, Covet, Endeavor, Zen Headbutt, Gunk Shot
-Change from Egg Cycles to Egg Steps.
-Maybe reorganize this so it follows this template?: pastebin.com/bWaL2cDi

For Toxiblin:
-Rename it? Toxiblin is pretty simple, just toxic + goblin (Seablin fits on the first evo, since it sounds kinda cute
-Change its level up so it's similar to Seablin's.
-Reorganize it so it follows the template.