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Post by kirby on Jun 17, 2015 22:11:18 GMT 1
Gaiashock, the Energy Pokémon Volt Absorb or Static 70/30/90/70/80/40, BST: 380 Genderless 0.4 m 150 kg Evolves into Gaiapulse by reaching level 34 Monster and Mineral Egg Groups 70 Base happiness 120 Catch rate Medium fast level-up rate 137 yield Base Experience 1 Defense yield EVs Grey Pokédex color 3840 base Egg steps Pokédex entries:
-It doesn't drink or eat anything. It only needs to absorb energy from the hole on his body to stay healthy. -The living energy mass that Gaiashock actually is uses rocks and boulders to form its body, and to attack if it's in danger. Moves learned by level up:
Start Tackle Start Thunder Wave 8 Thunder Shock 10 Take Down 16 Shock Wave 21 Ancient Power 24 Self Destruct 30 Power Gem 32 Earth Power 38 Thunderbolt 46 Stone Edge 52 Zap Cannon Moves learned by TM or HM:TM06 Toxic TM10 Hidden Power TM11 Sunny Day TM16 Light Screen TM17 Protect TM18 Rain Dance TM21 Frustration TM23 Smack Down TM24 Thunderbolt TM25 Thunder TM26 Earthquake TM27 Return TM33 Reflect TM37 Sandstorm TM39 Rock Tomb TM44 Rest TM57 Charge Beam TM64 Explosion TM69 Rock Polish TM70 Flash TM71 Stone Edge TM72 Volt Switch TM73 Thunder Wave TM74 Gyro Ball TM78 Bulldoze TM80 Rock Slide TM87 Swagger TM88 Sleep Talk TM90 Substitute TM91 Flash Cannon TM93 Wild Charge TM96 Nature Power TM97 Dark Pulse HM04 Strenght HM06 Rock Smash Moves learned by Move Tutor:
Snore Shock Wave Signal Beam Uproar Iron Head Zen Headbutt Earth Power Block Iron Defense Stealth Rock Moves learned by Breeding: none
This is an unfinished sketch. Rocks cover the whole body, and there's light blue energy glowing in the spaces between each rock. The cannon is grey, and the Shiny version has light green energy instead of light blue. Gaiapulse, the Energy Pokémon Strong Jaw or Mega Launcher 85/90/130/110/100/45, BST: 535 Genderless 2.50 m 950 kg Does not evolve Monster and Mineral Egg groups 90 base happiness 100 catch rate Medium fast level-up rate 270 yield base Experience 2 Special Defense and 2 Defense yield EVs Grey Pokédex color 10455 base Egg steps Pokédex entries:
-Due to its huge and intimidating size, it's rarely attacked by predators, but if it is, it's able to defend itself with the cannon on his body. -Its huge mouth can crunch and severlely damage its predators and enemies, but it's not used for eating. Like its pre-evolution, it absorbs energy to stay healthy. Moves learned by level-up:
Start Ice Fang Start Fire Fang Start Thunder Fang Start Magnet Lock (this move needs approval) If Magnet Lock doesn't get approval, remove it from Gaiapulse's starting moves. Start Thunder Wave Start Iron Fang (this move needs approval) If Iron Fang doesn't get approval, remove it from Gaiapulse's starting moves. Start Dark Pulse Start Dragon Pulse Start Aura Sphere 8 Thunder Shock 10 Take Down 16 Shock Wave 21 Ancient Power 24 Self Destruct 30 Power Gem 34 Magnet Lock (this move needs approval) If Magnet Lock doesn't get approval, Gaiapulse learns Thunderbolt instead. 42 Thunder Fang 46 Earth Power 49 Stone Edge 59 Zap Cannon 70 Rock Wrecker Moves learned by TM or HM:TM06 Toxic TM10 Hidden Power TM11 Sunny Day TM13 Ice Beam TM15 Hyper Beam TM16 Light Screen TM17 Protect TM18 Rain Dance TM21 Frustration TM22 Solar Beam TM23 Smack Down TM24 Thunderbolt TM25 Thunder TM26 Earthquake TM27 Return TM30 Shadow Ball TM33 Reflect TM35 Flamethrower TM37 Sandstorm TM39 Rock Tomb TM44 Rest TM53 Energy Ball TM57 Charge Beam TM64 Explosion TM69 Rock Polish TM70 Flash TM71 Stone Edge TM72 Volt Switch TM73 Thunder Wave TM74 Gyro Ball TM78 Bulldoze TM80 Rock Slide TM87 Swagger TM88 Sleep Talk TM90 Substitute TM91 Flash Cannon TM93 Wild Charge TM96 Nature Power TM97 Dark Pulse HM04 Strenght HM06 Rock Smash Moves learned by Move Tutor:
Snore Shock Wave Signal Beam Uproar Iron Head Zen Headbutt Earth Power Block Iron Defense Stealth Rock
Moves learned by Breeding: none
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Post by kekecleon on Jun 17, 2015 22:15:02 GMT 1
Ooh a Electric/Rock type is very unique, just need to add moves and some misc stuff. It's a good start! n_n
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kirby
Charmeleon
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Post by kirby on Jun 17, 2015 22:27:42 GMT 1
Thanks! I'll try my best, and i'm also thinking of a custom move for it!
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Post by kekecleon on Jun 17, 2015 22:41:45 GMT 1
Thanks! I'll try my best, and i'm also thinking of a custom move for it! You're welcome! Remember though, you need to make sure your custom move is approved before putting it into your Pokemon's data. :3
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The Run
Charmeleon
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Post by The Run on Jun 17, 2015 22:41:55 GMT 1
So far, so good and I'm waiting to see more. Also make sure to add the BST and Description (PokeDex Entry for each Fakemon).
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Post by Psych on Jun 17, 2015 23:54:02 GMT 1
I love the Mega-Launcher ability on it, I want to see how you round them out with movepools
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Post by fangame10 on Jun 18, 2015 0:49:40 GMT 1
I love the type same with ability (Zap cannon sweeper if it were able to hit) also I can imagine it looks like a rock monster thing with blue electric streaks around its body and electricity illuminating from it ...so cool imo
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Jun 18, 2015 1:12:34 GMT 1
....it's exactly like that, fangame10. °A°
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Post by Galom on Jun 18, 2015 2:15:25 GMT 1
It's kind of hard to comment on a mon that is incomplete. Please work more on this, then tag us.
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Jun 18, 2015 2:40:22 GMT 1
Okee. I'll work on the movepool and i'll get the art, then i'll tag again.
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Post by jaywad on Jun 24, 2015 11:50:44 GMT 1
Hello, what ur about to see may upset u, but here it is: About Misc. Data: The pre-evo is only supposed to give 1 EV yeild, and the evo is only supposed to give 2. Pls change that cuz they are double of what they should be. About Happiness, why is it so unhappy at 35? most usually get it at 70, so justify this pls About Abilities: For its evo, why does it have lightning rod? it has no horn. I suggest putting sturdy, [or my approved ability chipped] on this mon. It seems to match it. And its evo ??! Why is it that everyone spams the same abilities? When u think of the Pokemon, think about what abilities match it, not what abilities make it competitively strong. It should keep its pre-evo's abilities imo cuz mega launcher and strong jaws are so far really exclusive. About stats: Minor thing, I think it's a little too high. I suggest either lowering it from the Special attack-defense stats. Also, why is that speed soo low? About Moves: Why does it learn: Shadow Ball, Flame Charge, Psychic, dark Pulse, Dazzling Gleam, fang moves, Ice beam, Blizzard, Flamthrower, sludge bomb, gravity, and Rock Wrecker? If u want to keep some of these moves, I need justification. And rock wrecker is a big no because it's a signature move that only one other pokemon gets it. This shouldn't have it. Also, i'm guessing the fangs are the moves hidden when it evolves? Yep, that's all for now. The main issue is the moves that it learns. I suggest trying to edit 'em a bit.
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Post by kirby on Jul 1, 2015 14:37:26 GMT 1
Hello, what ur about to see may upset u, but here it is: About Misc. Data: The pre-evo is only supposed to give 1 EV yeild, and the evo is only supposed to give 2. Pls change that cuz they are double of what they should be. About Happiness, why is it so unhappy at 35? most usually get it at 70, so justify this pls About Abilities: For its evo, why does it have lightning rod? it has no horn. I suggest putting sturdy, [or my approved ability chipped] on this mon. It seems to match it. And its evo ??! Why is it that everyone spams the same abilities? When u think of the Pokemon, think about what abilities match it, not what abilities make it competitively strong. It should keep its pre-evo's abilities imo cuz mega launcher and strong jaws are so far really exclusive. About stats: Minor thing, I think it's a little too high. I suggest either lowering it from the Special attack-defense stats. Also, why is that speed soo low? About Moves: Why does it learn: Shadow Ball, Flame Charge, Psychic, dark Pulse, Dazzling Gleam, fang moves, Ice beam, Blizzard, Flamthrower, sludge bomb, gravity, and Rock Wrecker? If u want to keep some of these moves, I need justification. And rock wrecker is a big no because it's a signature move that only one other pokemon gets it. This shouldn't have it. Also, i'm guessing the fangs are the moves hidden when it evolves? Yep, that's all for now. The main issue is the moves that it learns. I suggest trying to edit 'em a bit. About Misc. Data: Gaiashock gives 1 EV yield, and Gaiapulse gives 2. I think you didn't read correctly. About Happiness: You're right, i'll change that. About Abilities: It has Lightning Rod because it absorbs electricity from the hole on its body. Mega Launcher and Strong Jaw are given because Gaiapulse has a cannon weapon on top of its body, and has an huge mouth. The cannon is the reason why it learns Shadow Ball, Dark Pulse, Dazzling Gleam, Ice Beam, Blizzard, Flamethrower and Sludge Bomb. Its mouth is the reason why it learns fang moves. There's no real reason behind Psychic and Gravity, so i might remove them. Rock Wrecker is related to the cannon as well, and it's not a signature move anymore from Generation 5, where Dwebble and Crustle became able to learn it with Rhyperior.
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Post by Snaquaza on Jul 1, 2015 15:56:58 GMT 1
Your body shape doesn't exist.
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kirby
Charmeleon
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Post by kirby on Jul 1, 2015 18:23:50 GMT 1
Your body shape doesn't exist. Fixed.
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Jul 2, 2015 21:54:43 GMT 1
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Post by sybskuh on Jul 2, 2015 22:22:20 GMT 1
I think that the BST of gaiashock is way too high. Also try and drop Gaipulses too around 480-500. I think moves like Flame Charge and Attract are a bit weird. And stage 1 pokemon normally dont give 2 things in EVyield. For the rest it looks amazing
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kirby
Charmeleon
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Post by kirby on Jul 2, 2015 23:45:54 GMT 1
tfw i gave Attract to a genderless mon
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Post by Galom on Jul 3, 2015 6:49:42 GMT 1
-Why does it get Solar Beam? -Why does it get Magic Coat? -Gaiashock's BST is insanely high for an LC mon. -Strong Jaw is kind of random as an Ability, especially for a mon that doesn't seem to fight with fangs.
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Jul 3, 2015 8:39:50 GMT 1
-Why does it get Solar Beam? -Why does it get Magic Coat? -Gaiashock's BST is insanely high for an LC mon. -Strong Jaw is kind of random as an Ability, especially for a mon that doesn't seem to fight with fangs. -Again, the cannon on his head can shoot various attacks. -Doesn't make that much sense, you're right. I'll proceed with removing it. -No problem here, i'll lower the BST a bit. Maybe dropping some Attack and Defense? -Gaiapulse clearly has a huge mouth, and it's stated in its description that it crunches opponents with it.
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Jul 7, 2015 17:50:11 GMT 1
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Post by kekecleon on Jul 7, 2015 20:34:03 GMT 1
I really like the design and the idea of this 'mon! The BST for Gaiashock is pretty high though. Maybe drop it to around 300-350? Also, Gaiapulse knows a lot of random moves for a non Legendairy or non Normal-type. Everything else seems to fit, nice job! :3
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Post by Level 51 on Jul 8, 2015 14:19:12 GMT 1
kirby: talked with you about this on PS. Approved 0.5/3
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Post by jaywad on Jul 8, 2015 19:46:48 GMT 1
Hello, what ur about to see may upset u, but here it is: About Misc. Data: The pre-evo is only supposed to give 1 EV yeild, and the evo is only supposed to give 2. Pls change that cuz they are double of what they should be. About Happiness, why is it so unhappy at 35? most usually get it at 70, so justify this pls About Abilities: For its evo, why does it have lightning rod? it has no horn. I suggest putting sturdy, [or my approved ability chipped] on this mon. It seems to match it. And its evo ??! Why is it that everyone spams the same abilities? When u think of the Pokemon, think about what abilities match it, not what abilities make it competitively strong. It should keep its pre-evo's abilities imo cuz mega launcher and strong jaws are so far really exclusive. About stats: Minor thing, I think it's a little too high. I suggest either lowering it from the Special attack-defense stats. Also, why is that speed soo low? About Moves: Why does it learn: Shadow Ball, Flame Charge, Psychic, dark Pulse, Dazzling Gleam, fang moves, Ice beam, Blizzard, Flamthrower, sludge bomb, gravity, and Rock Wrecker? If u want to keep some of these moves, I need justification. And rock wrecker is a big no because it's a signature move that only one other pokemon gets it. This shouldn't have it. Also, i'm guessing the fangs are the moves hidden when it evolves? Yep, that's all for now. The main issue is the moves that it learns. I suggest trying to edit 'em a bit. About Misc. Data: Gaiashock gives 1 EV yield, and Gaiapulse gives 2. I think you didn't read correctly. About Happiness: You're right, i'll change that. About Abilities: It has Lightning Rod because it absorbs electricity from the hole on its body. Mega Launcher and Strong Jaw are given because Gaiapulse has a cannon weapon on top of its body, and has an huge mouth. The cannon is the reason why it learns Shadow Ball, Dark Pulse, Dazzling Gleam, Ice Beam, Blizzard, Flamethrower and Sludge Bomb. Its mouth is the reason why it learns fang moves. There's no real reason behind Psychic and Gravity, so i might remove them. Rock Wrecker is related to the cannon as well, and it's not a signature move anymore from Generation 5, where Dwebble and Crustle became able to learn it with Rhyperior. Here are some move descriptions for moves that u listed above get "shot out of a cannon": Shadow Ball: User hurls a black blob at the target Dark Pulse: User releases a mass of imbued thoughts at the target Dazzling gleam: User emits a powerful flash Ice Beam: User is struck with an icy-cold beam of energy Blizzard: A howling blizzard is summoned to strike the opposing team. Flamethrower: The target is scorched with an intense flash of fire Sludge bomb: Unsanitary sludge is hurled at the target Ok, some may work out in a way where they get launched out [dark pulse, ice beam, flamethrower, and sludge bomb], but remember, this is a rock-type. Also, the other mega-launchers with cannons can only learn ice beam and dark pulse throughout the list, and ice beam is because most water-types can get it. Just cuz you have a cannon doesn't mean you can launch various attacks. It depends on what kind of cannons a rock/electric type can launch, and the only ones matching to me are rock blast and zap cannon. I pretty much like everything else here [except strong jaws, but you already know that ]. Nice work! [Again]
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Jul 8, 2015 19:58:51 GMT 1
About Misc. Data: Gaiashock gives 1 EV yield, and Gaiapulse gives 2. I think you didn't read correctly. About Happiness: You're right, i'll change that. About Abilities: It has Lightning Rod because it absorbs electricity from the hole on its body. Mega Launcher and Strong Jaw are given because Gaiapulse has a cannon weapon on top of its body, and has an huge mouth. The cannon is the reason why it learns Shadow Ball, Dark Pulse, Dazzling Gleam, Ice Beam, Blizzard, Flamethrower and Sludge Bomb. Its mouth is the reason why it learns fang moves. There's no real reason behind Psychic and Gravity, so i might remove them. Rock Wrecker is related to the cannon as well, and it's not a signature move anymore from Generation 5, where Dwebble and Crustle became able to learn it with Rhyperior. Here are some move descriptions for moves that u listed above get "shot out of a cannon": Shadow Ball: User hurls a black blob at the target Dark Pulse: User releases a mass of imbued thoughts at the target Dazzling gleam: User emits a powerful flash Ice Beam: User is struck with an icy-cold beam of energy Blizzard: A howling blizzard is summoned to strike the opposing team. Flamethrower: The target is scorched with an intense flash of fire Sludge bomb: Unsanitary sludge is hurled at the target Ok, some may work out in a way where they get launched out [dark pulse, ice beam, flamethrower, and sludge bomb], but remember, this is a rock-type. Also, the other mega-launchers with cannons can only learn ice beam and dark pulse throughout the list, and ice beam is because most water-types can get it. Just cuz you have a cannon doesn't mean you can launch various attacks. It depends on what kind of cannons a rock/electric type can launch, and the only ones matching to me are rock blast and zap cannon. I pretty much like everything else here [except strong jaws, but you already know that ]. Nice work! [Again] With Level 51's help, i went through the move list and removed all unfitting moves: Dazzling Gleam, Blizzard, Sludge Bomb and (i think) Shadow Ball got removed, as well as Solar Beam, Flame Charge, Covet and other unfitting moes. Thanks for your support .3.
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Post by jaywad on Jul 8, 2015 20:08:31 GMT 1
Oh...i never noticed.. soo sorry ;-; Then I guess this mon's ok !
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