[ti]Approved[/ti]Carbonare + Flammoxis

[SirMinun]

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Image above is the concept for both pokemon. Please feel free to comment.

Name:Carbonare
Type:Poison/Fire
Height: 1'6
Weight: 2.4lbs
Ability: Levitate
Egg Group:Amorphous, Field
Body Shape: cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/1/17/Body01.png
Foot Print:None
Dex Color:Black
Catch Rate: 150
Level Up Rate: Medium Fast
Gender Ratio: 50/50
Egg Hatch Steps: 5230 - 5589
Base Exp Yield: 64
EV Yield: 1 Sp.Atk
Dex Entry: Fume Pokemon
Carbonare Is Thought To Have Came From Deep Within Volcanoes Where The Noxious Fumes Roam About. It Tends To Stay Away From People And Releases A Flammable Gas That It Can Ignite When Threatened.

Carbonares Comes From Deep Within Volcanoes. Its Noxious Fumes Can Both Poison A Target And Be Used To Cause Large Outbursts Of Fire.

HP:60 Attk:30 Def:55 Sp.Attk:80 Sp.Def:55 Speed:40 BST:320

Move Pool (By Level)
Start:Smog
Level 5:Smokescreen/Poison Gas (Learns Both)
Level 8:Incinerate
Level 13:Leer
Level 16:Mean Look
Level 21:Clear Smog
Level 24:Sludge
Level 29:Haze
Level 32:Flame Burst (EVOLVES INTO FLAMMOXIS)
Level 37:Minimize
Level 42:Eruption
Level 47:Explosion
Level 50:Double-Edge



Name:Flammoxis
Type:Poison/Fire
Height: 2'7
Weight: 5lbs
Ability: Levitate
Egg Group:Amorphous, Field
Body Shape: TBD
Foot Print:None
Dex Color:Black
Catch Rate: 100
Level Up Rate: Medium Slow
Gender Ratio: 50/50
Base Exp Yield: 171
EV Yield: 2 Sp.Atk
Dex Entry: Emission Pokemon
Flammoxis Are Typically Anti-Social And Live Near Or In Volcanoes. The Highly Flammable Fumes That Emit From Its Body Are Used In Battle To Defend Its Territory.

Flammoxis Rarely Make Contact With Humans And Live In Extreme Heat Environments Like Volcanoes Or Craters. The Fumes That Emit From Its Body Are Highly Flammable Allowing This Pokemon To Cause Very Large Explosions.

HP:70 Attk:40 Def:80 Sp.Attk:135 Sp.Def:75 Speed:95 BST:495

Move Pool (By Level)
Start:Smog
Level 5:Smokescreen/Poison Gas (Learns Both)
Level 8:Incinerate
Level 13:Leer
Level 16:Mean Look
Level 21:Clear Smog
Level 24:Sludge
Level 29:Haze
Level 32:Flame Burst (EVOLVES INTO FLAMMOXIS)
Level 37:Minimize
Level 42:Eruption
Level 47:Sludge Bomb
Level 50:Acid Armor
Level 55:Lava Plume
Level 58:Explosion
Level 63:Double-Edge

TM Moves
Toxic
Venoshock
Hidden Power
Taunt
Hyper Beam (Flammoxis Only)
Protect
Frustration
Return
Shadow Ball
Double Team
Sludge Wave
Flamethrower
Sludge Bomb
Fire Blast
Torment
Facade
Flame Charge
Rest
Attract
Thief
Round
Echoed Voice
Overheat
Focus Blast
Incinerate
Will-o-Wisp
Embargo
Giga Impact (Flammoxis Only)
Poison Jab
Sleep Talk
Substitute
Dark Pulse
Nature Power
Confide

Egg Moves & Parents
Destiny Bond: Gengar Line/Koffin/Weezing/Wobuffet/Misdreavus/Gardevoir Line/Swalot Line/Banette Line/Dusknoir Line/Drifblim Line/Mismagius/Spiritomb/Gallade
Nasty Plot: Spiritomb/Mismagius Line/Cofagrigus Line
Heat Wave: Magcargo Line/Chandelure Line/
Ancient Power: Magcargo Line
Curse: Gengar Line/Bannette Line/Dusknoir Line/Spiritomb/Muk Line/Weezing Line/Mismagius Line/Magcargo Line/Swalot Line/Chimecho/Gastrodon Line
Pain Split: Misdreavus/Weezing Line/Swalot Line/Dusknoir Line/Spiritomb
Explosion: Weezing Line/Drifblim Line/Muk Line/Gengar Line

Tutor Moves
Snore
Heat Wave
Foul Play
Pain Split
Gastro Acid


COMING SOON

Body Shape:

[Devoxys]

One submission at a time please. You'll have to drop or finish your other Fakemon before you work on this.

[SirMinun]

Sept 30, 2015 12:50:00 GMT 1 Devoxys said:

One submission at a time please. You'll have to drop or finish your other Fakemon before you work on this.

I deleted the other post.

[jaywad]

Well, it seems great and is a good concept for a fakemon. A fiery cloud of smoke from a volcano would be cool, especially since we're making a volcano in the game's map. Though, a flaw i may see here is if it is too similar to koffing. Tell me design wise, how would this look?

[SirMinun]

Sept 30, 2015 16:05:32 GMT 1 jaywad said:

Well, it seems great and is a good concept for a fakemon. A fiery cloud of smoke from a volcano would be cool, especially since we're making a volcano in the game's map. Though, a flaw i may see here is if it is too similar to koffing. Tell me design wise, how would this look?

I am working on the design as we speak. So I Will Be Posting Once Im Satisfied With it.

[Devoxys]

Ok. Now time for some actual feedback:

1. Missing Things: You need another Dex Entry for each Fakemon; Egg Parents.

2. I think you can add some more level up moves. Add 1 more move to Carbonare and give more 1 or 2 more moves to Flammoxis.

3. Questionable moves: Defog, Destiny Bond, Dazzling Gleam, Dark Pulse, Snarl, Infestation, Shadow Claw, Embargo, Thief, Torment

4. You may be missing a few universal TMs/Move Tutors, check. I can see that you are missing moves like Snore and Sleep Talk.

[SirMinun]

Removed TM In Question
Removed Tutor Moves

Added More Level Up Moves
Added Gender Ratio/Egg Hatch Steps/Level Up Rate/Catch Rate
Added Universal TM
Added More Egg Moves
Added Second Dex Entries

Need Help With Figuring Out Egg Move Parents And Tutor Moves.

Working On Design & Body Shape

[Devoxys]

SirMinun

-Egg Parents, copy off other Pokemon.
-Tutor moves, check the "Pokemon Submission Rules" and scroll down to the post by Level 51.
-Need: Base EXP Yield: Carbonare: BST*4/20 Flammoxis: BST*7/20

[SirMinun]

Im not understanding the BST part. Can You Elaborate

[Devoxys]

Base EXP Yield is the amount of EXP you get from defeating another Pokemon in battle, before multipliers such as level.
It is calculated like this:
LC Pokemon: BST (Base Stat Total) times 4 divided by 20 (BST*4/20)
Second Stages and Standalone Pokemon: BST*7/20
Third stages and Legendaires: BST*9/20

If you end up with a decimal, round.

[SirMinun]

Removed Some Egg Moves
Added Egg Parents
Added Base EXP Yield
Added Tutor Moves

Design In Progress

[Kim BC]

I really like the concept, especially the name. Carbonare sounds perfect. Technical feedback, everything seems fine except some moves I would question are calm mind and gunk shot. Calm mind because its found near volcanoes which is everything but calm and gunk shot because I don't see garbage forming from a gas.

[SirMinun]

I will keep that in mind Kim thank You

[SirMinun]

Any other feedback on this mon so I can post design soon

[Cyberknight98]

This seems well thought-out, overall. I'd say a drawing or detailed description is in order.

[SirMinun]

Im going to have to do a description, cause im not sure how to post images on here without using a 3rd party.

[Cyberknight98]

SirMinun, you can post something to imgur and then link it here...

[SirMinun]

Concept Art submitted. Please feel free to check it out.

[Cyberknight98]

D'awwww it's 'dorable! ^-^ I really like the design choice of toxic gases and ash from volcanoes, as opposed to pollution like most poison types.

[SirMinun]

Haha thanks, I may change the eye color to red to signify more fire type in first evo. Since the design kinda lacks that hint, overall im happy with it though.

[Cyberknight98]

Everything here looks really solid except for the Egg Cycles. It can't just be 5000. Check Bulbapedia for a similar pokemon and just copy their egg cycles.

[SirMinun]

cycles fixed. awaiting approval

[SirMinun]

Galom Snaquaza Psych awaiting approval

[Salient]

Aww! The designs are adorable! Wondering why the second evolution doesn't learn Eruption, thought. It's a tiny volcano, so I think it should learn them. I'll comment more nitpicks about this later but it's a great idea! And don't tag Psych, he isn't a Project Leader anymore.

[Devoxys]

A few things to do before approval:
-Carbonare Base Exp. Yield should be 64
-Flammoxis Base Exp. Yield should be 172
-Try setting a pattern for the level-up move levels, like 3, 5, 3, 5 etc. For Flammoxis increase each level by one
-Add Eruption on Flammoxis, replace Double-Edge and add Double-Edge at the end.

After this is done, change the tag to "Quality Control".