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Post by rexthegamer on May 2, 2016 20:29:00 GMT 1
-I'd suggest lowering the catch rate a bit, considering it's an earthworm it can't be that hard to catch maybe 150? -Worms have both sexual organs therefore they shouldn't be classed as different genders, therefore egg moves are invalid if you are trying to make this an earthworm. -Near end you fall off of the pattern in level up moves should be 4,4,5,4,4,5,4,4,5 However at Dragon tail it should be 60 not 61 then fissure is kept the same. After that i'd happily approve it (Only can approve 0.5 though) Let me know when you have finished that
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Post by Deleted on May 2, 2016 20:43:42 GMT 1
1. The lower the catch rate, the harder it is to catch. 2. I don't think the sexual organs matter very much, because its a kids game and all that.
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Post by rexthegamer on May 2, 2016 20:53:48 GMT 1
But sexual organs pick the gender, if it has both organs therefore how can it be one gender? Its literally both therefore should be gender less.
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Post by rexthegamer on May 2, 2016 20:54:16 GMT 1
Approval 2.5 Good Job :3
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Post by Cyberknight98 on May 3, 2016 16:05:16 GMT 1
Few concerns I have: -Burroworm shouldn't learn Dragon Tail, especially not from level-up, since only dragons learn it through level-up. You could potentially have it learn it through TM's, but I don't really see how it fits. -Bulldoze is learned pretty late in the move pool, compared to Dig or Magnitude and only being a 60 BP move. -It's genderless now, so remove Attract from TM's. -Add TM39: Rock Tomb, TM80: Rock Slide, and TM94: Secret Power for sure. You could also add TM69: Rock Polish, and TM53: Energy Ball. -Add Drill Run and Earth Power to move tutors for sure, and maybe Stealth Rock, Aqua Tail, and Iron Defense. -You could consider adding some more egg moves. -I suggest lowering the catch rate to 90. This puts it on par with Durant and Heatmor, which have the same BST and are also 1-stage mons incapable of evolving.
Fix these and I will approve Burroworm.
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Post by Deleted on May 3, 2016 18:34:37 GMT 1
Many staff disagreed with Energy Ball.
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Post by Cyberknight98 on May 3, 2016 20:06:37 GMT 1
That's fine, if they don't want energy ball, then don't add it. Still a couple things that need to be addressed that I talked about above, such as adding the move tutors. Additionally, Bulldoze should be moved down in level, as the highest level any ground type learns bulldoze is Golem at level 22.
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Post by Deleted on May 4, 2016 14:26:14 GMT 1
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Post by Cyberknight98 on May 4, 2016 15:26:29 GMT 1
You still need to add Drill Run and Earth Power to tutor moves for sure. You could also add stealth rock, but that's up to your discretion.
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Post by Cyberknight98 on May 4, 2016 15:49:16 GMT 1
One small grammatical thing in the second Pokedex Entry: Replace "They can regenerate their bodies if injured, making it one of the most durable Pokemon in the world." With "Burroworms can regenerate their bodies if injured, making them one of the most durable Pokemon in the world."
Other than that: APPROVED 3/3
Good Work, MegaHOP ^-^
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Post by kizzo212 on May 9, 2016 0:44:08 GMT 1
It shouldn't get aqua tail by level-up, only learnt by level-up by water types and a couple of dragon types (dratini/dragonair which are somewhat aquatic, goodra and dragalge). Body Slam still seems a bit iffy. It's fine getting Iron defense, but maybe a bit iffy as a level-up move imo. Both aqua tail and iron defense are tutor moves, so need to be added as those nevertheless. And I'm not too sure on how well drill run works. Doesnt have a horn, and doesnt exactly seem like something that drills into the ground. Then again not really sure how its justified for claydol/baltoy/forretress so eh, prob could get away with it.
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