[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2]

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[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Jul 20, 2016 23:32:44 GMT 1 Devoxys likes this

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Post by Devoxys on Jul 20, 2016 23:32:44 GMT 1

Pupnambul and Psomnine
The Sleepwalking Pokemon

Posting this while Mattercule gets approved. Not sure if I have enough posts though

. This is the fakemon that I made for Heavy Sleeper.

Sleepup, the Sleepwalking Pokémon (From Puppy and Somnambulism)
Psychic Type
Abilities: Heavy Sleeper, HA: Comatose
Stats: 67 HP/61 Atk/51 Def/40 SpA/51 SpD/39 Spe (BST: 309)

Evolves into Psomnine at level 26

Design:
A white, bipedal dog. It has magenta ears and nose and its eyes are closed. A bubble is coming out of its nose, as if it were sleeping (which it is). It has a magenta collar.

Physical Details
Height: 0.6 m
Weight: 11.2 kg
Egg Group: Human-like, Field
Gender Ratio: 50/50
Pokedex Colour: White
Body Type: (Bipedal, Tail)

Technical Details
Catch Rate: 75
Hatch Time: 6630-6994 steps
Base EXP Yield: 62
EV Yield: 1 SpA

Pokedex Entry
Sleepup are always asleep, but it is usually not at rest. It needs to be put to sleep by an outside force.

Level-Up Moves
1. Tackle
1. Tail Whip
4. Astonish
7. Cerebral Slap
10. Focus Energy
13. Confusion
16. Bite
20. Yawn
24. Refresh
28. Rest
28. Snore
32. Sleep Talk
36. Psywave
40. Hypnosis
40. Dream Eater
44. Zen Headbutt

TM and HM Moves
TM03 Psyshock
TM04 Calm Mind
TM06 Toxic
TM10 Hidden Power
TM16 Light Screen
TM17 Protect
TM21 Frustration
TM27 Return
TM28 Dig
TM29 Psychic
TM30 Shadow Ball
TM31 Brick Break
TM32 Double Team
TM42 Façade
TM44 Rest
TM45 Attract
TM48 Round
TM52 Focus Blast
TM67 Retaliate
TM70 Flash
TM77 Psych Up
TM85 Dream Eater
TM88 Sleep Talk
TM90 Substitute
TM94 Secret Power
TM98 Power-up Punch
TM100 Confide
HM06 Rock Smash

Move Tutors:
Snore
Drain Punch
Zen Headbutt
After You
Helping Hand

Egg Moves:
Psybeam
Amnesia
Cosmic Power
Stored Power
Extrasensory
Detect
Double Kick

Psomnine, the Sleepwalking Pokémon (From Psychic, Somnabulism, and Canine)
Psychic Type
Abilities: Heavy Sleeper, HA: Comatose
Stats: 101 HP/95 Atk/76 Def/60 SpA/76 SpD/59 Spe (BST: 467)

Does not Evolve

Design:
Similar to its prevo. It is now taller and a bit skinnier. It has magenta coloured psychic energy around its neck where its collar is, as well as where its closed eyes are. Its arms and legs are longer and better suited for combat.

Physical Details
Height: 1.2 m
Weight: 21.2 kg
Egg Group: Human-like, Field
Gender Ratio: 50/50
Pokedex Colour: White
Body Type:

Technical Details
Catch Rate: 45
Hatch Time: 6630-6994 steps
Base EXP Yield: 163
EV Yield: 1 SpA, 1 HP

Pokedex Entry
Psomnine use their Psychic powers to guide themselves flawlessly, never bumping it anything. It also allows for very strong and precise attacks.

Level-Up Moves
1. Tackle
1. Tail Whip
4. Astonish
7. Cerebral Slap
10. Focus Energy
13. Confusion
16. Bite
20. Yawn
24. Refresh
28. Rest
28. Snore
32. Sleep Talk
36. Psywave
40. Hypnosis
40. Dream Eater
44. Zen Headbutt

TM and HM Moves
TM03 Psyshock
TM04 Calm Mind
TM06 Toxic
TM10 Hidden Power
TM16 Light Screen
TM17 Protect
TM21 Frustration
TM27 Return
TM28 Dig
TM29 Psychic
TM30 Shadow Ball
TM31 Brick Break
TM32 Double Team
TM42 Façade
TM44 Rest
TM45 Attract
TM48 Round
TM52 Focus Blast
TM67 Retaliate
TM70 Flash
TM77 Psych Up
TM85 Dream Eater
TM88 Sleep Talk
TM90 Substitute
TM94 Secret Power
TM98 Power-up Punch
TM100 Confide
HM04 Strength
HM06 Rock Smash

Move Tutors:
Snore
Drain Punch
Zen Headbutt
After You
Helping Hand

Egg Moves:
Psybeam
Amnesia
Cosmic Power
Stored Power
Extrasensory
Detect
Double Kick

Last Edit: Nov 14, 2016 0:50:12 GMT 1 by Devoxys

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In The Works
-Fakemon: Infantail, Soraitail and Fantailsy (WIP)
-Move: Chill
-Ability: Deep Sleep

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[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Jul 21, 2016 1:24:47 GMT 1

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Post by Cyberknight98 on Jul 21, 2016 1:24:47 GMT 1

-Human-Like seems like an odd egg group... perhaps it'd make more sense if we had a picture, but I don't really see it.

-No other Pokemon line has that Hatch Time. Consider changing it to 5355-5609 steps?

-Remember that we already have a 2-stage psychic type based around sleeping: Muuna and Musharna. Try and distance these from them if you can... I could even see this being a Psychic/Normal type.

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[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Jul 21, 2016 7:48:42 GMT 1 via mobile

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Post by Salient on Jul 21, 2016 7:48:42 GMT 1

Definitely not a fan of the names. The evolution suffers from "it gets bigger" syndrome, so change up the designs, concept art would be nice, plus it'll help later on in the process. Didn't you say this would get a Psychic/Fighting form? For when it's awake? Would like to see that back. Shall comment from laptop later

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[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Jul 21, 2016 18:59:13 GMT 1

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Post by Devoxys on Jul 21, 2016 18:59:13 GMT 1

Cyberknight98 I meant 6630 - 6884 (same as a whole bunch of Pokemon).

This is pretty distant from Munna/Musharna, sure they're both related to sleep, but this one is sleepwalking and the other is dreaming.

As for the typings, I was considering Psychic/Fighting and Psychic/Normal, but because we needed pure Psychic-type Pokemon, I prefer to keep it this way.

Salient Give me name ideas, I'm bad at naming things.

I'll make the prevo a bit more different then.

I did not plan a Psychic/Fighting awake form. I considered a Psychic/Fighting typing but decided against it.

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In The Works
-Fakemon: Infantail, Soraitail and Fantailsy (WIP)
-Move: Chill
-Ability: Deep Sleep

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[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Jul 21, 2016 19:24:10 GMT 1

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Post by rexthegamer on Jul 21, 2016 19:24:10 GMT 1

I LOVE this pokemon.
Overall critics:
You have used very complicated names to name these pokemon, i understand they are to do with sleep but they are quite hard to make names with, my not use something like trance, slumber, tired, asleep, coma? Ie Comanine?
First evo:
-You have done lvl 28 twice for two moves?
28. Rest
28. Snore
-Why special attack ev yield? It seems to be one of the lowest stats.

Second evo:
You missed off body type.
I dont think ", never bumping it anything." is necessary imo. (Dex Entry)

Overall i love this pokemon

You could also make it a 3 evo similar to Stoutland or keep it similar to houndoom but i dont really mind. Good Job <3

Approved: Ventria + Empestria. Acorell + Flarell. Moonkay + Lunape + Gallarilla. Cumulamb + Stratosheep + Thundram.

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[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Jul 21, 2016 19:29:45 GMT 1

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Post by Devoxys on Jul 21, 2016 19:29:45 GMT 1

rexthegamer Because none of those words reflect the concept this is based off of (sleepwalking)

The double 28 is correct. It is how it is done with Snorlax: Rest and Snore are learnt at the same level, then Sleep Talk at the next.

I'll fix that later. It was because I shuffled the stats around

There was an image there, it failed to copy.

The never bumping into anything part makes it sound like an actual dex entry imo

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In The Works
-Fakemon: Infantail, Soraitail and Fantailsy (WIP)
-Move: Chill
-Ability: Deep Sleep

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rexthegamer Charizard Approved: Ventria and Empestria, Acorell and Flarell, Moonkay, Lunape and Gallarilla Posts: 288	[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Aug 4, 2016 22:15:36 GMT 1 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rexthegamer on Aug 4, 2016 22:15:36 GMT 1 The only thing i can see, imo, negative, is the names, im finding it hard to pronounce them, maybe its just me though?
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Devoxys Charizard #ForeverHaxed Posts: 940	[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Aug 5, 2016 20:33:04 GMT 1 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Devoxys on Aug 5, 2016 20:33:04 GMT 1 Pupnambul is pronounced, well, pup-nam-bul(l), and Psomnine is prounounced Som-nine.
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Devoxys Charizard #ForeverHaxed Posts: 940	[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Aug 23, 2016 1:52:22 GMT 1 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Devoxys on Aug 23, 2016 1:52:22 GMT 1 Bump
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rexthegamer Charizard Approved: Ventria and Empestria, Acorell and Flarell, Moonkay, Lunape and Gallarilla Posts: 288	[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Aug 23, 2016 10:58:00 GMT 1 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rexthegamer on Aug 23, 2016 10:58:00 GMT 1 Overlooking the names, and after you told us how to pronounce them, the names dont seem to bad to me, approved 1/3
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Salient Administrator Boss Ass Bitch gay space rocks Posts: 576	[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Nov 8, 2016 17:10:26 GMT 1 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Salient on Nov 8, 2016 17:10:26 GMT 1 Are you going to keep working on these Devoxys?
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Devoxys Charizard #ForeverHaxed Posts: 940	[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Nov 8, 2016 21:34:55 GMT 1 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Devoxys on Nov 8, 2016 21:34:55 GMT 1 Yes, when I'm not as busy with school.
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Devoxys Charizard #ForeverHaxed Posts: 940	[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Nov 14, 2016 0:50:50 GMT 1 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Devoxys on Nov 14, 2016 0:50:50 GMT 1 bump Salient
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Salient Administrator Boss Ass Bitch gay space rocks Posts: 576	[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Nov 14, 2016 1:33:09 GMT 1 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Salient on Nov 14, 2016 1:33:09 GMT 1 Not really a fan of the name tbh. ALso, this doesn't have any approvals bc of the update (anything before still needs to get two)
	Last Edit: Nov 15, 2016 17:29:25 GMT 1 by Salient I used to have all my listed approvals but eh, too lazy to update. === Tag me with "@ smogoon" (without the space) if you need: approval/comments on a submission or a thread locked/moved/unlocked. === Expect to be a bit specific when QCing stuff, it's a quality check for a reason.

Devoxys Charizard #ForeverHaxed Posts: 940	[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Sleepup and Psomnine: The Sleepwalking Pokemon [QC 1/2] Nov 17, 2016 21:45:58 GMT 1 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Devoxys on Nov 17, 2016 21:45:58 GMT 1 Salient Suggest a better one?
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