Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on May 26, 2015 18:55:54 GMT 1
Bomben: the Bombadier Pokémon Fire-type 45 HP | 65 Atk | 60 Def | 40 SpA | 60 SpD | 30 Spe || BST: 300 Abilities: Aftermath or Reckless Hidden Ability (Available): Mold Breaker
Evolves into Bomblast starting at level 40.
Design: Bomben is a short, stout pokemon with short legs and arms. Its left arm ends in a hand made of fire, and the other ends in a hole from which its fire attacks come from. Its body is very round with a small wick like a cartoon bomb coming out near the top of its back. Its head rises slightly above its body with two small red eyes. It has no discernable mouth.
Physical Details: Height: 2'4" (0.7 m) Weight: 176 lbs (80 kg) [80 BP] Egg Group: Mineral Gender Ratio: Genderless Pokedex Color: Black
Technical details: Catch Rate: 120 Hatch Time: 5355 - 5609 steps Experience Yield: 60 Leveling Rate: Medium Slow Base Friendship: 70 EV Yield: 1 ATK
Shiny Design: Bomben's normally black body becomes pink, its fire turns blue, and its eyes turn white; a reference to the Bob-omb buddies from Super Mario 64.
Pokédex Entries: OR: Their bodies are filled with large amounts of energy. They can release it all at once in a powerful explosion. AS: These pokemon prefer to live solitary lives to avoid destroying the things it loves.
Level-up moves: Start: Self-Destruct Start: Tackle Start: Defense Curl Level 3: Ember Level 8: Smokescreen Level 13: Rollout Level 18: Self-Destruct Level 22: Firecracker Level 26: Lock-On Level 30: Flame Burst Level 35: Gyro Ball Level 40: Work Up Level 45: Explosion Level 50: Flare Blitz
TM/HM moves: TM06: Toxic TM08: Bulk Up TM10: Hidden Power TM12: Taunt TM17: Protect TM21: Frustration TM27: Return TM32: Double Team TM35: Flamethrower TM38: Fire Blast TM42: Façade TM43: Flame Charge TM44: Rest TM48: Round TM49: Echoed Voice TM59: Incinerate TM70: Flash TM78: Bulldoze TM80: Rock Slide TM87: Swagger TM88: Sleep Talk TM90: Substitute TM91: Flash Cannon TM94: Secret Power HM04: Strength HM06: Rock Smash
Tutor moves:
Snore Heat Wave Iron Defense Iron Head Fire Punch
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Bomblast: the Explosive Pokémon Fire/Steel-type 100 HP | 135 Atk | 85 Def | 50 SpA | 85 SpD | 40 Spe || BST: 495 Abilities: Aftermath or Reckless Hidden Ability (Available): Mold Breaker
Evolves from Bomben starting at level 40.
Design: Bomblast look similar to Bomben, but it has grown much, much larger. Its body is no longer nearly as round, instead, it's narrower and taller, similar to the shape of the "Fat Man" atomic bomb. Its two arms have grown proportionally to its body. Now one arm ends in a fist made of fire, while the other fist is steel-clad. On each shoulder rests a rocket-like spike that protrudes upward.
Physical details: Height: 7'11" (2.4 m) Weight: 1,200 lbs (544 kg) [120 BP] Egg Group: Mineral Gender Ratio: Genderless Pokedex Color: Black
Technical details: Catch Rate: 45 (5.9%) Hatch Time: 5355 - 5609 steps Base Experience Yield: 173 Leveling Rate: Medium Slow Base Friendship: 70 EV Yield: 2 ATK
Shiny Design: Bombast's body turns red, its eyes turn black, and its fire turns blue.
Pokédex entries: OR: It is very kind, despite its menacing look. It has full control of its explosive body. AS: When backed into a corner, Bomblast will unleash its full energy to protect what it loves.
Level-up moves: Start: Self-Destruct Start: Lock-On Start: Barrage Start: Fire Punch Level 11: Magnet Bomb Level 16: Firecracker Level 21: Iron Defense Level 27: Iron Head Level 32: Clear Smog Level 37: Overheat Level 41: Explosion Level 45: Heavy Slam Level 50: Bullet Punch Level 55: Work Up Level 60: Heat Crash Level 65: Flare Blitz Level 70: Explosion
TM/HM moves: TM06: Toxic TM08: Bulk Up TM10: Hidden Power TM12: Taunt TM15: Hyper Beam TM17: Protect TM21: Frustration TM26: Earthquake TM27: Return TM32: Double Team TM35: Flamethrower TM38: Fire Blast TM42: Façade TM43: Flame Charge TM44: Rest TM48: Round TM49: Echoed Voice TM52: Focus Blast TM59: Incinerate TM68: Giga Impact TM70: Flash TM78: Bulldoze TM80: Rock Slide TM87: Swagger TM88: Sleep Talk TM90: Substitute TM91: Flash Cannon
TM93: Wild Charge TM94: Secret Power HM04: Strength HM06: Rock Smash
Tutor moves: Snore Heat Wave Focus Punch Gravity Fire Punch Iron Defense Iron Head Stealth Rock Magnet Rise Sample Build (PU):
Bomblast @ Choice Band Ability: Reckless EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SpD Adamant Nature - Heavy Slam - Flare Blitz - Wild Charge - Earthquake
Suggestions/Ideas are appreciated!
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Post by jaywad on May 26, 2015 19:25:53 GMT 1
Well I like the idea of an atomic bomb with a fuse running as a fire type! I've always been lured into those bulky exploding Pokemon like golem and Gigalith, and now there's a fire one waiting to be used! Although, I have a few suggestions: -Mega Launcher? I get it that you want to use this ability more [since there are only two with this ability], but those pulse users have four pulse moves, whereas this mon has only dark and dragon pulse. Only Mons with all the moves should deserve this imo. Flash fire and mold breaker seem fine to me on it tho. -Bomben to Mortrawr? Just a question, how does an atomic bomb-like pokemon somehow transform into a beast with a cannon mouth? Mortrawr is the problem in the way. Maybe a little alter on the design to make it seem as if it was some combination of a beast and a bomb. -Moves like searing shot? Searing shot is ONLY given to Victini, so this Pokemon shouldn't learn it. Also i know its a bomb, but other bombs like electrode don't start with self-destruct. tbh i think it should be learned later on and not as a sterting move. Besides these, my gloomy eyes can't see anything else wrong [for now], so continue to work on this. I'm looking forward to it
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Post by Snaquaza on May 26, 2015 19:33:14 GMT 1
I didn't read this through yet, however I feel badly that this should have some animal influence. We have quite some non-living ones already, and you know the critique on them normally. I feel like having some elements of a War God like Kartikeya (the Hindi one to refer to India) and otherwise maybe some robotic influences? These may not be exactly an animal, but will make it more than a bomb, especially the god.
Will read through another time, but I feel like Jaywad has good comments.
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on May 26, 2015 19:55:28 GMT 1
jaywad, I realize now I actually used the wrong move. Instead of Searing shot, I meant to use flame burst and got the two mixed up. It's fixed now. For Bomben turning into Mortrawr, remember that only Bomblast is based on an atomic bomb, whereas Bomben is based more on bombs/explosions in general. I think of this as two branching paths in explosives, one in bombs, and one in mortars/cannons. I'm going to do some rough drawings soon and maybe you'll see how Bomben can evolve into both.
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Post by jaywad on May 26, 2015 19:59:10 GMT 1
lol no wonder searing shot was there. flame burst matches this pokemon pretty well!
Hmm, maybe the drawings will be useful, but as Snaq said usually non-animal based Pokemon don't really get liked as much. Maybe base this off of a lizard-explosives user.
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Post by Devoxys on May 26, 2015 20:29:58 GMT 1
This seems pretty good right now. I only have a problem with early Self-Destruct, its still a very annoying move to face, even into the mid-game. Also, typo: Hatch Time: 6366 - 5609 steps on on Bombden
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Post by blackburn009 on May 26, 2015 22:58:21 GMT 1
I like this concept, small thing that bomben's hatch time is different than the other 2 which are you using? Does bullet punch really suit any of these pokémon? I know it has bullet in its name but they don't seem to be able to punch as fast as a bullet.
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on May 26, 2015 23:29:15 GMT 1
I think that might be a slight oversight, Blackburn. Thanks for catching it.
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Post by Snaquaza on May 27, 2015 6:19:17 GMT 1
Why is the level-up movepool so small for the final two evolutions?
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Post by jaywad on May 27, 2015 9:30:16 GMT 1
I was wondering that too actually. I know that bomblast starts his movepool at the level he evolves from Bomben, but that would mean he has the same exact moves as bomben, but just added to it and to continue its length of moves. Some pre-evo mons learn moves that their evo can't, and vice versa. I think you should edit it a bit. Also mortrawr is definitely not a continuation [since it evolves from a fire stone], so why is its first move at level 15? There only needs to be some changes around with these movepools.
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
What is love? A chemical imbalance in the brain?
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Post by Cyberknight98 on May 27, 2015 13:20:26 GMT 1
I said in the OP that their movesets aren't complete yet. I'm still working on it, but finals and end of year projects got me down.
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Post by jaywad on May 27, 2015 13:25:18 GMT 1
lol ikr. Trust me it'll be worth the try
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Dec 2, 2015 2:45:04 GMT 1
I'd like to open this back up. Would anyone be willing to help me and give suggestions on these mons?
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Post by pokemonvortex on Dec 4, 2015 22:39:56 GMT 1
Maybe you should give some more high crit ratio moves as Sniper is its ability.
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Cyberknight98
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Dec 7, 2015 4:37:31 GMT 1
There really aren't a lot of moves that have a high crit ratio, and even less that are special moves... None would really fit.
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Cyberknight98
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Dec 7, 2015 17:13:09 GMT 1
I'm thinking about removing Mortrawr from the line and just making this Bomben and Bomblast. Gaiapulse, an already approved fakemon, has a very similar design to what I imagined Mortrawr having. I think this will also help streamline the process of approving this fakemon and give me less to work out.
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Dec 7, 2015 19:02:50 GMT 1
Update: Added Reckless to available abilities and created a sample build. I see Bomblast being used in PU as a wallbreaker or on a trick room team.
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
What is love? A chemical imbalance in the brain?
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Dec 8, 2015 19:04:54 GMT 1
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
What is love? A chemical imbalance in the brain?
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Dec 16, 2015 5:02:55 GMT 1
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Jan 6, 2016 5:48:24 GMT 1
Edit: Added Firecracker to the moveset, since it was recently approved.
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Post by pokemonvortex on Jan 6, 2016 23:41:43 GMT 1
Oh right. I forgot to tell you about that XD
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Cyberknight98
Charizard
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Jan 12, 2016 4:55:17 GMT 1
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Kim BC
Charmeleon
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Post by Kim BC on Jan 12, 2016 19:54:57 GMT 1
Good Pokemon overall, only nitpicks i have is Barrage since it's signature, Bullet Punch since I'm assuming this doesn't have hands but it has arms, and Stealth Rock since it's a bomb not a rock in anyway or relation with a rock.
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Cyberknight98
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Post by Cyberknight98 on Jan 12, 2016 20:09:16 GMT 1
Oh yeah... I suppose Barrage is signature... Bomblast does have a fist made of metal, and I can see where you're coming from with Stealth Rock. I'll take out Barrage and Stealth Rock.
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Kim BC
Charmeleon
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Post by Kim BC on Jan 12, 2016 21:17:53 GMT 1
I meant bomben for bullet punch because it doesn't have a fist made of metal, only fire
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