[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Stormatopod & Stormatofry

[Bondie]

Stormatofry
Type: Water / Electric
Ability: Iron Fist / Illuminate / Technician
Species: The Sea Shrimp Pokemon
Stats: 35 HP / 85 Atk / 45 Def / 25 SpA / 35 SpD / 75 Spe (300 BST)
Dex Entry: Young Stormatofry are often found in small hordes, able to overcome large opponents through sheer numbers.
Height: 0.4M | 4Kg (20 BP) | Gender: 50% Male 50% Female
Base Experience Yield: 60
Leveling rate: Medium Slow
EV Yield: 1 Attack
Egg Group(s): Water 3, Water 1
Catch Rate: 215
Steps to Hatch: 5355 - 5609
Evolve at level: 26 (upon learning Thunder Punch)

Movepool

Level Up:

Level 1 (start): Tackle
Level 1 (start): Defense Curl
Level 3: Bubble
Level 5: Leer
Level 8: Quick Attack
Level 11: Harden
Level 14: Bubble Beam
Level 17: Spark
Level 20: Water Gun
Level 23: Thunder Punch
Level 26: Slam
Level 29: Crabhammer
Level 32: Ice Punch
Level 36: Dynamic Punch
Level 40: Guillotine

TMs / HMs

TM01: Hone Claws
TM06: Toxic
TM08: Bulk Up
TM10: Hidden Power
TM17: Protect
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM31: Brick Break
TM32: Double Team
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM45: Attract
TM48: Round
TM55: Scald
TM65: Shadow Claw
TM81: X-Scissor
TM84: Poison Jab
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM98: Power-Up Punch
TM100: Confide
HM03: Surf
HM04: Strength
HM06: Rock Smash
HM07: Dive

Move Tutor:

Superpower
Water Pulse
Knock Off
Iron Defense
Snore
Shock Wave
Thunder Punch
Ice Punch
Drain Punch
Aqua Tail
Icy Wind

Egg Moves:

Agility
Aqua Jet
Bullet Punch
Cross Poison
Knock Off
Slam



Stormatopod
Type: Water / Electric
Ability: Iron Fist / Illuminate / Technician
Species: The Sea Shrimp Pokemon
Stats: 55 HP / 125 Atk / 70 Def / 55 SpA / 65 SpD / 110 Spe  (480 BST)
Dex Entry: Using compressed air, the Stormatopod fires its fists lightning fast. Often paralyzing its prey before attacking.
Height: 1.6M | Weight: 45Kg (60 BP) | Gender: 50% Male 50% Female
Base Experience Yield: 168
Leveling Rate: Medium Slow
EV Yield: 2 Attack 1 Speed
Egg Group(s): Water 3, Water 1
Catch Rate: 85
Steps to Hatch: 5355 - 5609

Movepool

Level Up:

Level 1 (start): Tackle
Level 1 (start): Defense Curl
Level 4: Bubble
Level 7: Leer
Level 10: Quick Attack
Level 14: Harden
Level 18: Bubble Beam
Level 22: Spark
Level 26: Water Gun
Level 30: Thunder Punch
Level 34: Slam
Level 38: Crabhammer
Level 42: Ice Punch
Level 46: Guillotine
Level 51: Iron Defense


TMs / HMs

TM01: Hone Claws
TM06: Toxic
TM08: Bulk Up
TM10: Hidden Power
TM17: Protect
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM31: Brick Break
TM32: Double Team
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM45: Attract
TM48: Round
TM55: Scald
TM65: Shadow Claw
TM81: X-Scissor
TM84: Poison Jab
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM98: Power-Up Punch
TM100: Confide
HM03: Surf
HM04: Strength
HM06: Rock Smash
HM07: Dive

Move Tutor:

Superpower
Water Pulse
Knock Off
Iron Defense
Snore
Shock Wave
Thunder Punch
Ice Punch
Drain Punch
Aqua Tail
Icy Wind

Egg Moves:

Agility
Aqua Jet
Bullet Punch
Cross Poison
Knock Off
Slam

[Kim BC]

A shrimp with fists?...mmmk. Think I need to see a pic to see how that would work.The description of Stormatopod says it has claws o-o. Give it Tough Claws imo.

[Flerovium]

Just saying, all the Pokémon in one evolution chain should have the same exp. growth rate. You'll also want to add the EV yield for Stormatofry too.

[sybskuh]

There are 2 errors that i see.
Like flerovium said the exp yield must be the same.
The EV yield must be 2 Atk.

[Psych]

Add the movepool you nerd Bondie.

I'm not 100% sold on the sea shrimp with fists, need to see some art on that one.

[Bondie]

It is based off a mantis shrimp, which has one of the fastest strikes in the natural world, hence electric type. This is also the reason for the idea of it having fists, as they have hammer-like appendages, which would be easily adapted into arms in the design.

[Psych]

a few quick points;

- Needs more TM/HM moves, egg moves, and tutor moves
- When does it evolve in Stormapod?
- Mantis Shrimp is cool, I like it (You may have a hard time differentiating from Crawdaunt enough for the other checkers)
- This feels like it could learn some Bug-type moves, I hope you see the same and add it in
- it may seem nitpicky, but lower the leveling rate, everything here has Medium/Fast.

Just a few things for ya, I know this is in WIP, tag me if you need me.

[Bondie]

Aight, changed the levelling rate to medium
In regards to the design being similar to a Crawduant, a Mantis shrimp actually looks closer to Scolipede, so I was thinking it could have elements of both
Completely forgot to add when it evolves, done that now, thanks for pointing that out.
As of yet, I've only c/ped the TM/HM moves that all pokemon should get to make sure I don't forget them

[Psych]

ahh ok, just continue adding to this and it'll be good

[colester112]

The name is a little off putting to me but thats just my opinion

[The Run]

The movesets are good, but whats weird is that its a shrimp with fists >w>

[Kim BC]

The EV Yeild for the first evo is a off. I like the concept of this mon but I don't see how it can have claws and fists unless it's a special case like infernape. I just looked up a pic of a mantis shrimp and it has lomg claws compared to its body but I don't see how on earth it would be punching with those.

[Cyberknight98]

video.nationalgeographic.com/video/worlds-deadliest/deadliest-mantis-shrimp For reference.

I like this idea, however I feel like the electric typing is a bit off. I feel like Water/Fighting would fit much better.

[Bondie]

Sept 11, 2015 0:58:32 GMT 1 Kim BC said:

The EV Yeild for the first evo is a off. I like the concept of this mon but I don't see how it can have claws and fists unless it's a special case like infernape. I just looked up a pic of a mantis shrimp and it has lomg claws compared to its body but I don't see how on earth it would be punching with those.

If you look at how they defend themselves, they punch out with the claws at high speeds (hence the electric typing) which is what gave me the idea to turn these claws into more fist like shapes

[Salient]

Stormatofry:
Nitpicks

• The typing should be Water/Electric. Pokemon's primary typing is based off of what's more prominent in the design.
• EV Yield should be 1 attack or 1 speed. Not 2 attack and 1 speed.
• You're missing the Exp. Yield, which should be 60. 
• You're missing a dex entry, it should have two (One OR/X, one AS/Y).
• Hatch rate seems a little too high for him. It's a shrimp, and it takes almost as many egg steps to hatch as a Lunatone.
• I think you should give it Dynamic Punch after Ice Punch, or replace it. 
• Level-up moves are kinda sporadic, the increments being 3, 3, 5, 4, 3, 4, 3, 6, 3, 6
• Kinda odd that it only gets 3 egg moves by level up. Maybe give it Bullet Punch, Cross Poison, and Aqua Jet. 
• It has a very shallow special move-pool, and doesn't learn much that isn't stab.
• Lastly, not too sure on it getting crabhammer... It's not a crab, and unless I'm imagining it wrong it doesn't have claws like the ones that do learn it.

Stormatopod:

• Tutor Moves: Snore, Water Pulse, Shock Wave, Signal Beam, Thunder Punch, Ice Punch, Knock Off, Aqua Tail, Focus Punch, Iron Defense, and maybe Electroweb all make sense for this 'mon imo.
• Add moves before it evolves
• I think the EV Yield should be either 2 Attack, or 1 Attack and 1 Speed, since Idr if second stages get 3 EVs.

[Salient]

Alright, looks fairy complete. Stormatopod's hatch time should be the same as fry's, and give it a level-up movepool before it evolves (don't just start from the level where it evolves). I think the tutor move list is a bit small, but that might just be me.

[Salient]

Approved 1/3

[Devoxys]

The level-up move levels should follow a pattern, like intervals of 2 and 4 or growing like 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 4, 4.

Stormatofry Base Experience Yield should be 60.
Stormatopod Base Experience Yield should be 168.

Hatch Time should be a range; copy another Pokemon's hatch time.

[Devoxys]

5400-5600 is not a valid hatch time. Change it to 5355-5609.

The level up move levels are still messed up.

[Devoxys]

Change the level-up moves to this pattern:

Stormatofry:

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Level 1 (start): Tackle
Level 1 (start): Defense Curl
Level 3: Bubble
Level 5: Leer
Level 8: Quick Attack
Level 11: Harden
Level 14: Bubble Beam
Level 17: Spark
Level 20: Water Gun
Level 23: Thunder Punch
Level 26: Slam
Level 29: Crabhammer
Level 32: Ice Punch
Level 36: Dynamic Punch 
Level 40:(Add one more move here)

Stormatopod:

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Level 1 (start): Tackle
Level 1 (start): Defense Curl
Level 4: Bubble
Level 7: Leer
Level 10: Quick Attack
Level 14: Harden
Level 18: Bubble Beam
Level 22: Spark
Level 26: Water Gun
Level 30: Thunder Punch
Level 34: Slam
Level 38: Crabhammer
Level 42: Ice Punch
Level 46: Guillotine
Level 51: Iron Defense

Do that, then Approved 2/3

[Salient]

You're missing Tutor Moves. Snore, Shock Wave, Thunder/Ice Punch, Drain Punch, Aqua Tail, Icy Wind

[Bondie]

Implemented Salient

[Salient]

Cool. Does this evolve when it levels up when having Thunder Punch? Or at level 26? Bondie