[ti]Rejected[/ti]Freezette, Porcupice + Siocupine (Approved 0/3)

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Foreword: So this is a collab mon with me and rexthegamer . Enjoy! (P.S. Here is the rough design for the mon line imgur.com/CMRCabz Tilt your head sideways to see it properly.)

Freezette: the Spiky Pokemon.
Type: Ice
40 HP | 51 Atk | 30 Def | 51 SpA | 30 SpD | 25 Spe (227 BST)
Abilities: Rough Skin or Frost Bite
Evolves into Freezette at 18 then again into Porcupice at 36

Design:
- Cute little porcupette baby who has a white nose, it has snow on its back. It has little tiny feet!

Physical Details:
Height: 0.2 m
Weight: 2.1 Kg
Egg Group: Field
Gender Ratio: 50%

Technical Details:
Catch rate: 210
Hatch time: 4080-4334 steps
Base Happiness: 70
Base Exp Yield: 80
EV Yield: +1 SpA
Leveling Rate: Medium Fast
Pokedex Color: White
Pokedex Shape: Mensal
Pokedex Entry: Frostette has extremely soft fur, softer than snow. It can raise its fur to become short, yet sharp icicles.

Level-up Moves:
Lv.1: Tackle
Lv.1: Defense Curl
Lv.4: Grass Whistle
Lv.7: Baby-Doll Eyes
Lv.10: Charm
Lv.14: Pin Missile
Lv.17: Growth
Lv.20: Bite
Lv.24: Ice Fang
Lv.27: Spikes
Lv.30: Ingrain
Lv.34: Ice shard
Lv.37: Frost Breath
Lv.40: Ice Beam

TM and HM Moves:
TM06: Toxic
TM07: Hail
TM10: Hidden Power
TM13: Ice Beam
TM14: Blizzard
TM17: Protect
TM18: Rain Dance
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM32: Double Team
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM45: Attract
TM79: Frost Breath
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM100: Confide

Egg Moves: 
Hail
Powder Snow
Glaciate
Grass Knot
Freeze-Dry

Tutor Moves:
Snore
Hyper Voice
After You
Icy Wind
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Porcupice: the Sharp Pokemon.
Type: Ice
50 HP | 64 Atk | 50 Def | 64 SpA | 50 SpD | 40 Spe (318 BST)
Abilities: Rough Skin or Frost Bite

Evolves from Freezette at 23 then again into Porcupice at 36

Design:
This pokemon has grown quite a bit and its fur has turned into sharp icicles.

Physical Details:
Height: 0.4 metre
Weight: 5.2 kg
Egg Group: Field
Gender Ratio: 50%

Technical Details:
Catch rate: 150
Hatch time: 4080-4334 steps
Base Happiness: 70
Base Exp Yield: 111
EV Yield: +2 SpA
Leveling Rate: Medium Fast
Pokedex Color: White
Pokedex Shape: Mensal
Pokedex Entry: Freezette's needles are like extremely sharp icicles. On rare occasions, these icicles can freeze people and Pokemon. 

Level-up Moves:
Lv.1: Tackle
Lv.1: Defense Curl
Lv4: Grass Whistle
Lv.7: Baby-Doll Eyes
Lv.10: Charm
Lv.14: Pin Missile
Lv.17: Growth
Lv.20: Bite
Lv.24: Ice Fang
Lv.27: Spikes
Lv.30: Ingrain
Lv.34: Ice shard
Lv.37: Frost Breath
Lv.40: Ice Beam
Lv.44: Crunch
Lv.47: Icicle Crash


TM and HM Moves:
TM06: Toxic
TM07: Hail
TM10: Hidden Power
TM13: Ice Beam
TM14: Blizzard
TM17: Protect
TM18: Rain Dance
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM32: Double Team
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM45: Attract
TM79: Frost Breath
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM100: Confide

Egg Moves:
Hail
Powder Snow
Glaciate
Grass Knot
Freeze-Dry

Tutor Moves:
Snore
Hyper Voice
After You
Icy Wind
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Siocupine (see-OC-you-pine): the Icicle Pokemon.
Type: Ice
80 HP | 93 Atk | 60 Def | 93 SpA | 60 SpD | 65 Spe (436 BST)
Abilities: Rough Skin or Frost Bite

Evolves from Freezette at 23 then again into Porcupice at 36

Design:
Porcupice now stands on 2 feet and has developed hands of somesort. It has spikes protruding from its back and has sharp icy claws. It balances with a small tail. It has white snow fur and has baby blue eyes.

Physical Details:
Height: 0.6 metres
Weight: 9.5 kg
Egg Group: Field
Gender Ratio: 50%

Technical Details:
Catch rate: 60
Hatch time: 4080-4334 steps
Base Happiness: 70
Base Exp Yield: 153
EV Yield: +1 SpA, +1 Atk, 
Leveling Rate: Medium Fast
Pokedex Color: White
Pokedex Shape: Mensal
Pokedex Entry: Porcupice has evolved to adapt to the environment. When its too hot, it's icicles will melt to cool it down, and when it's cold, the icicles will freeze again.

Level-up Moves:
Lv.1: Tackle
Lv.1: Defense Curl
Lv.4: Grass Whistle
Lv.7: Baby-Doll Eyes
Lv.10: Charm
Lv.14: Pin Missile
Lv.17: Growth
Lv.20: Bite
Lv.24: Ice Fang
Lv.27: Spikes
Lv.30: Ingrain
Lv.34: Ice shard
Lv.37: Frost Breath
Lv.40: Ice Beam
Lv.44: Snap Freeze
Lv.47: Icicle Crash
Lv.50: Leaf Blade
Lv.54: Blizzard


TM and HM Moves:
TM06: Toxic
TM07: Hail
TM10: Hidden Power
TM13: Ice Beam
TM14: Blizzard
TM17: Protect
TM18: Rain Dance
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM32: Double Team
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM45: Attract
TM79: Frost Breath
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM100: Confide

Egg Moves:
Hail
Powder Snow
Glaciate
Grass Knot
Freeze-Dry

Tutor Moves:
Snore
Hyper Voice
After You
Icy Wind

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Salient Cyberknight98 kizzo212

[Devoxys]

Use m not cm for height.

Design can be more descriptive.

Pokedex entries can be more descriptive.

Bind is questionable.

Freezette's Pokedex Entry is wrong. It should be "Freezette's needles are like very sharp icicles". Also, don't say "sharper than a diamond", as diamonds are hard not sharp.

List Egg Parents. 

Be more creative with the BSTs. End them with "imperfect" numbers as opposed to 0s or 5s. I feel that BSTs such as 225 and 320 have been used before in this project.

[rexthegamer]

We don't need to list parents anymore Devoxys

[Devoxys]

Alright. I prefer to list them anyway.

[rexthegamer]

Bump

[Salient]

Just gonna go through and suggest stuff/QC.

Really iffy on the name. Frostette just sounds like an Ice-type child-like Pokemon to me. The Pointy Pokemon? You can do better than that. Pure Ice for all 3? I don't see how grass fits the design. Why are the attack stats higher than everything else? If anything, I'd assume Defense would be highest. Rough Skin? I guess it has icicles but be more creative? Thick Fat? Is this thing really fat, or did you want to weaken that 4x fire weakness? Also Frost Bite is good but I suggest it being one of the primary abilities. The design drawn by Rex is cute, but I don't know if it's Pokemon-like (to me it looks like a rat covered in ice). It's kinda big for a porcupette, considering it's over twice as big as Shaymin, yet weighs just as much as it. Use this hatch rate: 5355 - 5609. Dex entry: "(name)'s powder snow-like fur turns into sharp icicles when its frightened." It's a Grass-type but gets 1 grass type move in its entire level-up? Charm that early is never a thing. It learns Grass Whistle yet obviously has no grass in its design? Glaciate is signature to Kyurem (so it can't be used). Why Hail and Grass Knot as egg moves? They're TMs. Could possibly use more tutor moves but I see nothing else fitting.


EDIT:  sorry for the snarky remarks, wasn't in the best of moods.

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Back from the ded everyone, I haven't been on in the past few months, and I sadly won't be able to be on PS again because of life priorities. I probably will still be active on the forums in the future.

[jaywad]

This thing is PERFECT with frostbite and snap freeze!! Like the idea of a porcupine mon and relating its quills with icicles

Why is this thing part grass? It seems like a pure ice type from the way you describe it. However, maybe adding a bit of dex description and putting grassier elements in the mon's design would make it seem more like a grass type.

lastly, i feel as if its line should learn ice shard before ice fang imo

Beautiful and creative either way

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Kim BC Salient Devoxys Cyberknight98 for approval

[Devoxys]

Base EXP Yield for Freezette is 45.

Porcupice EV Yield is 1 Atk, 1 SpA.

Siocupine EV Yield is 2 Atk, 1 SpA or 1 Atk, 2 SpA.

Siocupine Base EXP Yieldis 196.

Lower the Catch Rate for Freezette and Porcupice by just a bit.

[Kim BC]

The stats are pretty low for a three stage pokemon.
I don't think Leaf Blade fits.
Glaciate can't be an egg moves as all the Pokemon that get it are genderless.
The stats kind of have a resemblance to Abomasnow but just slightly weaker.
Just realized grass typing was removed but has grass knot as an egg move