[ti]Approved[/ti]Seathrou and Invisibeel

[rexthegamer]

Okay, we have decided to add in a Gyarados/Milotic into our game and i have decided to create one my self.

Seathrou: the transparent Pokemon. (Sea + Through, play on see-through)

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water - type.
55 HP | 15 Atk | 10 Def | 20 SpA | 20 SpD | 80 Spe 200: BST
Abilities: Clear Body and Swift Swim
Hidden Ability: Filter

Evolves into Invisibeel at lvl 20 

Design:

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Basically, a glass fish design with a long ish tail and has two small horns made of glass.

Physical Details:

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Height: 0.8m
Weight: 9.5kg
Egg Group: Water 2
Gender Ratio: 50%

Technical Details:

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Catch rate: 225
Hatch time: 1530-1784
Base Happiness: 70
Base Exp Yield: 40
EV Yield: +1 Spe
Leveling Rate: Medium fast
Pokedex Color: Gray
Pokedex Shape: Ichthyic
Pokedex Entries:
{OR}: Seathrou are completely transparent, meaning they can easily escape from predators under water.
{AS}: These pokemon are made completely of glass, making them quite fragile in physical fights.

Level-up Moves:

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Lvl 1: Splash
Lvl 8: Tackle
Lvl 16: Bubble
Lvl 24: Bubble Beam
Lvl 32: Water Gun
Lvl 40: Flail

(Checked with Snaquaza these are okay considering its similar to feebas and magikarp)
TM and HM Moves:

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TM06: Toxic
TM10: Hidden Power
TM17: Protect
TM18: Rain Dance
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM32: Double Team
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM45: Attract
TM55: Scald
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM100: Confide
HMO3: Surf
HM05: Waterfall
HM07: Dive

Egg Moves:

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Captivate: Milotic, Gorebyss
Confuse ray: Lapras, Mantine
Mist: Lapras, Wooper, Quagsire, Lotad, Wingull, Pelipper, Swablu, Altaria, Surskit, Piplup, Prinplup, Empoleon.
Muddy Water: Barboach. Whiscash. Relicanth. Basculin. 

Tutor Moves:

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Water Pulse
Hyper Voice
Snore

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Invisibeel: the Submarine Pokemon. (Invisible + Eel) 

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water - type.
60/79/100/81/125/95 540:BST
Abilities: Clear Body and Swift Swim
Hidden Ability: Filter
Evolves from Seathrou at lvl 20

Design:

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A basilisk like design which is see through but it is also like a submarine with a properla on its tail and a scope on its fins.

Physical Details:

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Height: 5.6m 
Weight: 225 kg (Similar to Gyarados weight)
Egg Group: Water 2
Gender Ratio: 50%

Technical Details:

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Catch rate: 60
Hatch time: 1530-1784
Base Happiness: 70
Base Exp Yield: 189
EV Yield: +2 Spe
Leveling Rate: Medium Fast
Pokedex Color: Gray
Pokedex Shape: Ichthyic
Pokedex Entries:
{OR}: "Invisibeel can see 360 degrees in any direction, using their periscope-like eyes."
{AS}: "Invisibeel use their bright, glowing eyes to lure prey into their mouths."

Level-up Moves:

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Lvl 1: Wrap
Lvl 1: Water Gun
lvl 4: Water Sport
Lvl 9: Bubble
Lvl 15: Twister
Lvl 20: Water Pulse
Lvl 26: Dragon Tail
Lvl 31: Aqua Tail
Lvl 37: Attract
Lvl 42: Coil
Lvl 48: Hydro Pump
Lvl 53: Hyper Beam

TM and HM Moves:

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TM06: Toxic
TM07: Hail
TM10: Hidden Power
TM13: Ice Beam
TM14: Blizzard
TM15: Hyper Beam
TM17: Protect
TM18: Rain Dance
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM32: Double Team
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM45: Attract
TM55: Scald
TM82: Dragon Tail
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM100: Confide

HMO3: Surf
HM05: Waterfall
HM07: Dive

Egg Moves:

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Captivate: Milotic, Gorebyss
Confuse ray: Lapras, Mantine
Mist: Lapras, Wooper, Quagsire, Lotad, Wingull, Pelipper, Swablu, Altaria, Surskit, Piplup, Prinplup, Empoleon.
Muddy Water: Barboach. Whiscash. Relicanth. Basculin.

Tutor Moves:

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Aqua Tail
Bounce
Icy Wind
Outrage
Uproar
Water Pulse
Hyper Voice
Dragon Pulse
Snore

[Cyberknight98]

Alright, let's get started.
-There is no Silver Pokedex Color. Replace it with Blue.
-Change the Pokedex Entries to the following:
-Glazen OR:"Glazen are completely transparent, meaning they can easily escape from predators under water."
-Glazen AS: "These pokemon are made completely of glass, making them quite fragile in physical fights.
-Glasub OR: "Glasubs can see 360 degrees in any direction, using their periscope-like eyes."
-Glasub AS: "Glasubs use their bright, glowing eyes to lure prey into their mouths."

-Glazen Catch Rate should be 45
-Glasub Catch Rate should be 255
-Glazen Base Experience Yield should be 40
-I feel like Swift Swim makes more sense as an ability than Storm Drain
-Glazen should not learn ANY TM's, HM's, or get any egg moves. The only tutor move it can get is Bounce.

[Salient]

Feebas can learn TMs, Cyberknight, so thatms fine. My biggest issue with these things is that they don't sound pike fish. As I said in chat, it sounds more like a glazed donut than anything. Magikarp and Feebas have fish in their name, so this should too.

[Cyberknight98]

Fair enough, I forgot Feebas learned TM's. If you want it to learn some, that's fine, Rex. I do agree that Glazen needs a name change.

[rexthegamer]

Prodding Devoxys Salient Kim BC for QC

[Anonymous Platypus]

There IS indeed a white Pokedex color, so I think the line should be white.

[Kim BC]

-Only the Seaking line gets waterfall through level up
-I'd prefer better abilities on Invisibeel rather than those overused ones since Miltoic and Gyarados get some pretty decent abilities.

[rexthegamer]

This is pretty much finished

[Devoxys]

Seathrou Catch Rate 255. (aka Feebas)
Invisibeel Catch Rate 60. (aka Milotic)

Change those things and then Approved 1/3

[Kim BC]

Approved 2/3

[Anonymous Platypus]

Approved 2.5/3

[Cyberknight98]

Ehm... Approved 3.5 out of 3? Anyways, Good job!

[rexthegamer]

Cheers everyone!

[kizzo212]

- Bubblebeam before water gun?
- Don't know about it actually being "made of glass". Maybe say its body is made of scales similar to glass or something along those lines?

- EV yield for Invisibeel should probably move from speed to something else. And not too keen on its stat distribution tbh. I get its going with the "clone" thing, but think it could be differentiated.

Other than that yeah seems fine.