[ti]Quality Control[/ti]Amberone -> Amberage Fossil Idea Rock/Steel

[rexthegamer]

ORIGINAL Design: puu.sh/qpWYy/cc5783b7ee.png PS THANK YOU SO MUCH "SUNFISHED", CREDIT GOES TO HIM <3
COLOURED DESIGN:  Please ignore the bottom left one, he is not included anymore.

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Amberone: the Amber Pokemon.
Rock/Steel-type.
80 HP | 50 Atk | 59 Def | 50 SpA | 32 SpD | 50 Spe (340 BST)   
Abilities: Battle Armour and Intimidate
Hidden Ability: Sturdy

Evolves into Amberage at 39 in a cave.

Design:
See top

Physical Details:
Height: 2m
Weight: 60kg
Egg Group: Dragon/Monster
Gender Ratio: 50%

Technical Details:
Catch rate: 95
Hatch time: 5355 - 5609 steps
Base Happiness: 70
Base Exp Yield: 119
EV Yield: +2 HP
Leveling Rate: Medium Fast
Pokedex Color: Brown
Pokedex Shape:

Pokedex Entries: When born, Amberone scour the caves in search of Amber to feast on. 

Level-up Moves:
-: Tackle
-: Charm
5 Baby Doll Eyes
9 Stomp
13 Stealth Rock
17 Iron Defense
21 Slash
25 Crunch
29 Metal Claw
33 Chip Away
37 Dragon Tail
41 Earth Quake
45 Iron head
49 Thrash
53 Head Smash

TM and HM Moves:
TM01: Hone Claw
TM02: Dragon Claw
TM05: Roar
TM06: Toxic
TM10: Hidden Power
TM11: Sunny day
TM12: Taunt
TM15: Hyper Beam
TM17: Protect
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM28: Dig
TM32: Double Team
TM35: Flame Thrower
TM37: Sandstorm
TM39: Rock Tomb
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM45: Attract
TM65: Shadow Claw
TM68: Giga Impact
TM69: Rock Polish
TM71: Stone Edge
TM74: Gyro Ball
TM78: Bulldoze
TM80: Rock Slide
TM82: Dragon Tail
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM100: Confide
04: Strength
06: Rock Smash

Egg Moves:
Fire Fang
Ice Fang
Poison Fang
Rock Polish
Thunder Fang

Tutor Moves:
Aqua Tail
Iron Head
Iron Tail
Outrage
Snore
Earth Power
Stealth Rock

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Amberage: the amber Pokemon.

Rock/Steel -type.

105 HP | 75 Atk | 91 Def | 90 SpA | 72 SpD | 85 Spe (540 BST)  
Abilities: Battle Armour and Intimidate 
Hidden Ability: Sturdy

Design: See top

Physical Details:
Height: 2.5m
Weight: 100kg
Egg Group: Dragon/Monster
Gender Ratio: 50%

Technical Details:
Catch rate: 25
Hatch time: 5355 - 5609 steps
Base Happiness: 70
Base Exp Yield: 243
EV Yield: +3 HP
Leveling Rate: Medium Fast
Pokedex Color: Brown
Pokedex Shape:

Pokedex Entries: The Amber found on Amberage can never break, it is invincible, acting as an armour.

Level-up Moves:
-: Tackle
-: Charm
5 Baby Doll Eyes
9 Stomp
13 Stealth Rock
17 Iron Defense
21 Slash
25 Crunch
29 Metal Claw
33 Chip Away
37 Dragon Tail
41 Earth Quake
45 Iron Head
49 Thrash
53 Head Smash
57 Rock Wrecker

TM and HM Moves:
TM01: Hone Claw
TM05: Roar
TM06: Toxic
TM10: Hidden Power
TM11: Sunny day
TM12: Taunt
TM15: Hyper Beam
TM17: Protect
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM28: Dig
TM32: Double Team
TM37: Sandstorm
TM39: Rock Tomb
TM42: Facade
TM44: Rest
TM45: Attract
TM65: Shadow Claw
TM68: Giga Impact
TM69: Rock Polish
TM71: Stone Edge
TM74: Gyro Ball
TM78: Bulldoze
TM80: Rock Slide
TM82: Dragon Tail
TM87: Swagger
TM88: Sleep Talk
TM90: Substitute
TM94: Secret Power
TM100: Confide
04: Strength
06: Rock Smash


Egg Moves:
Fire Fang
Ice Fang
Poison Fang
Rock Polish
Thunder Fang

Tutor Moves:
Aqua Tail
Iron Head
Iron Tail
Outrage
Snore
Earth Power
Stealth Rock

[rexthegamer]

Tagging for QC: Devoxys kizzo212 Salient Kim BC

[Devoxys]

I'm not really seeing the design of this. It looks like a crystal-dragon-unicorn, could you provide a description of the design?

Also, Willpower is not an ability (if it's fake, I don't think it fits this).

Echoing what Salient said, a gem-based Pokemon is not that creative anymore.

[rexthegamer]

1) I provided a description, and it is exactly a crystal dragon.
2) I will change will power
3) Salient said i can keep this pokemon because i changed it to a dragon/rock instead of a dragon/fairy and it doesnt matter if it is not that creative, how many pokemon have similar aspects that are repeated? Alot of pokemon.

[Salient]

I said you could keep the idea but with a different design. And yes, Devoxys, Willpower is an ability, but it doesn't fit this very well.

[Kim BC]

Disarming voice on the LC one is a bit iffy
The BST on Amberone is super low for whatever reason tying with the lowest BST: Sunkern, if that's what you were aiming for. It'd look like it's more powerful
Ambreone shouldn't have giga impact or hyper beam
No Pokemon learns Draco Meteor through level up I believe
The Amberake EV Yield should be 2 HP
Amberage's EV Yield should be 3 HP

[rexthegamer]

Completed all Issues

[Salient]

BST should be higher. All non-pseudo-legendary dragons have a BST around 535, so do 540. The coloring makes them look like Dragon/Steel rather than Dragon/Rock.

[Devoxys]

Is the missing Hidden Ability intentional?

On Amberone if you are aiming for a 4/4/4 pattern at the start then Baby Doll Eyes should be learnt at Level 5. 

Don't give this Snatch.

Missing Snore in Tutor Moves.

The Pokedex colour should be Brown or Yellow.

Put Stealth Rock and Earth Power in Amberone's Move Tutors as well.

[rexthegamer]

Yes, i purposely only gave it two abilities and no hidden ability, however i fixed everything else.

[rexthegamer]

Bump

[Salient]

Feel like we could use this as a fossilmon now if we remove the second stage. Though, the typing might have to change so it doesn't conflict with our other fossil.

[rexthegamer]

Could remove first evolution, and make it Rock/Steel maybe?

[rexthegamer]

Bump, Changed it for a fossil idea mon.

[Salient]

Include the first one but not the second one. The second one doesn't look as good.